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Array ( [sid] => 58440 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Splendor [time] => 2004-08-01 21:14:43 [hometext] => wow...this is so true to life for me. This one really means a lot to me because I put into words something that i experience almost everyday and something that continues to have the exact same effect on me as it did the first time it happened. Enjoy! [bodytext] => You smile at me and my mind reels.
I try with everything I am to stay suspended in that single fleeting moment,
in that moment where I'm on your mind...
in that moment when your eyes are filled with my reflection...
in that moment where your completely focused on me and nothing else.
I let that single instant sweep over me for as long as it will stretch
because it is then and only then that I belong to you,
and you are completely mine.
I revel in the beauty of your parted lips, your dark consuming eyes, the slow motion we seem to be held captive in,
knowing that that perfect smile is only for me
and hoping that it will never fade...
but time eventually speeds, your eyes wander away from my own, and your lips meet once again...
and I'm left with only a memory of that instant...
yearning for only one more moment,
as I watch you walk away and sigh as the loneliness settles in.
For I'd give my destiny to live in that second...
suspended forever in the splendor of your smile. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 2 [informant] => AloneSheCries [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Splendor

Contributed by AloneSheCries on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:14:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You smile at me and my mind reels.
I try with everything I am to stay suspended in that single fleeting moment,
in that moment where I'm on your mind...
in that moment when your eyes are filled with my reflection...
in that moment where your completely focused on me and nothing else.
I let that single instant sweep over me for as long as it will stretch
because it is then and only then that I belong to you,
and you are completely mine.
I revel in the beauty of your parted lips, your dark consuming eyes, the slow motion we seem to be held captive in,
knowing that that perfect smile is only for me
and hoping that it will never fade...
but time eventually speeds, your eyes wander away from my own, and your lips meet once again...
and I'm left with only a memory of that instant...
yearning for only one more moment,
as I watch you walk away and sigh as the loneliness settles in.
For I'd give my destiny to live in that second...
suspended forever in the splendor of your smile.




Copyright © AloneSheCries ... [ 2004-08-01 21:14:43]
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Re: Splendor (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:58:07 PM AEST
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another nice one.


Re: Splendor (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:53:25 AM AEST
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Well-written.


Re: Splendor (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:12:41 AM AEST
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Bravo! What splendid beauty. It left me speechless and wanting more.
Blu




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