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Array ( [sid] => 58402 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I LOVE YOU, SON [time] => 2004-08-01 13:14:40 [hometext] => This is in response to Dan666's [bodytext] => Every single time we argue and shout
Both our tempers rise
We are both on the edge
But slowly we are learning
That it gets us nowhere
And we recapture control

I would also like to say "I know everything"
But obviously I don't
I'm older and wiser
But not always right
I hate to lose an argument
Hate backing down
I'm still learning too

Never give up Daniel
Maybe just reassess the situation
I'll try if you will

I'm gonna try harder
Not to jump down your throat
Everytime you open your mouth
You make me laugh sometimes
I love that, when we're both happy
And I think you know that
I love you Daniel
With all my heart

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I LOVE YOU, SON

Contributed by AliB on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 01:14:40 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

Every single time we argue and shout
Both our tempers rise
We are both on the edge
But slowly we are learning
That it gets us nowhere
And we recapture control

I would also like to say "I know everything"
But obviously I don't
I'm older and wiser
But not always right
I hate to lose an argument
Hate backing down
I'm still learning too

Never give up Daniel
Maybe just reassess the situation
I'll try if you will

I'm gonna try harder
Not to jump down your throat
Everytime you open your mouth
You make me laugh sometimes
I love that, when we're both happy
And I think you know that
I love you Daniel
With all my heart

XXXXXXXXXXXXXX

Copyright © AliB ... [ 2004-08-01 13:14:40]
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Re: I LOVE YOU, SON (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 01:53:32 PM AEST
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OMG!!! This is so beautiful and so touching... I didn't know you were his Mom.... this is so sweet..... reminds me of how my sis and I used to correspond...I still we still do at times this way...lol...
Loved this,
Jenni

Re: I LOVE YOU, SON (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 02:22:41 PM AEST
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i'm sure he's a proud lad tonight, beautiful.

wildejohnny.

Re: I LOVE YOU, SON (User Rating: 1 )
by Dan666 on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 03:51:45 PM AEST
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thank you mum if it wont for you i would't of been able to write poems i have alot to learn yet though. love yaxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Re: I LOVE YOU, SON (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:56:38 PM AEST
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awww!! how precoius:) i just read all of daniels poetry, hes a very special fella, blessings to you both, hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: I LOVE YOU, SON (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 04:39:26 AM AEST
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This is a lovely heartfelt response to Dans poem Ali. I know you too butt heads quite often, but after spending time with you both I know Daniel loves you very much, and you him.

Excellent poem

Love Dawny xx

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