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Array ( [sid] => 584 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wings [time] => 2002-07-17 06:34:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => "now what is it this time?
what's the problem you have?
i've got plenty of free time
no i am not mad..."
paint a dismal scene to feel
colors dark and grey
it will take awhile to heal
start with what you say

and you sigh...
and you cry...

take a look at me, but don't tell me what you see
i'm here to help so save yourself, i can do nothing
i can push you along your way, guide you another day
but when the day is done i'm not the one to build your wings

"hey now where is your song?
your smile is lost somewhere
another day to another wrong
yes oh i do care..."
open a can of worms again
so they go away
i will be for you a friend
yes another day

and you sigh...
and you cry...

take a look at me, but don't tell me what you see
i'm here to help so save yourself, i can do nothing
i can tell you what you've heard, listen to these words
but when the day is done i'm not the one to build your wings

and i'm going to stay awhile
to watch you take flight
there's the edge so go ahead
you know this right...


***
(7/1/02) [comments] => 2 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 19 [informant] => Daniel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
Wings

Contributed by Daniel on Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 06:34:53 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



"now what is it this time?
what's the problem you have?
i've got plenty of free time
no i am not mad..."
paint a dismal scene to feel
colors dark and grey
it will take awhile to heal
start with what you say

and you sigh...
and you cry...

take a look at me, but don't tell me what you see
i'm here to help so save yourself, i can do nothing
i can push you along your way, guide you another day
but when the day is done i'm not the one to build your wings

"hey now where is your song?
your smile is lost somewhere
another day to another wrong
yes oh i do care..."
open a can of worms again
so they go away
i will be for you a friend
yes another day

and you sigh...
and you cry...

take a look at me, but don't tell me what you see
i'm here to help so save yourself, i can do nothing
i can tell you what you've heard, listen to these words
but when the day is done i'm not the one to build your wings

and i'm going to stay awhile
to watch you take flight
there's the edge so go ahead
you know this right...


***
(7/1/02)




Copyright © Daniel ... [ 2002-07-17 06:34:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 07:43:39 AM AEST
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I know you know I like this cuz I said it before... but I'll say it again...Beautiful write....
Always,
Dani


Re: Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by angelrae on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 01:33:58 PM AEST
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What a beautiful write. How wonderful it is to have such a friend as you. You cannot build her wings, but you can see her fly. Very inspiring, and uplifting, Thank you.




angelrae





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