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and i when i came short my words just fell through
when you look at this apparatus take note that the status
is fashionably late and well on out of any practice
yes well that is the gist of things taking normal
space in lieu of excess where nothing seems formal
my head is in a wormhole making it's way in place
it won't be in any other with the look on your face

i put my foot down
it's not a put down
i'm making good round
such a sweet sound

no matter what's the matter now i'm getting badder
worst case scenario always proves to be the latter
a mad hatter way of doing things to a progression
seems to get me in a heap pile without expression
no support from a parent person place or pleasure
not a room for a leisure that comes with a measure
delve to my endeavor and hope that you participate
taking feed to my need so i might just appreciate

i putting this down
still not a put down
i'm making good ground
such a sweet sound
hitting up the town
with a new crown
i'm making good round
with the surround sound [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 23 [informant] => Daniel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
Needing

Contributed by Daniel on Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



i worked my butt on and off to communicate to you
and i when i came short my words just fell through
when you look at this apparatus take note that the status
is fashionably late and well on out of any practice
yes well that is the gist of things taking normal
space in lieu of excess where nothing seems formal
my head is in a wormhole making it's way in place
it won't be in any other with the look on your face

i put my foot down
it's not a put down
i'm making good round
such a sweet sound

no matter what's the matter now i'm getting badder
worst case scenario always proves to be the latter
a mad hatter way of doing things to a progression
seems to get me in a heap pile without expression
no support from a parent person place or pleasure
not a room for a leisure that comes with a measure
delve to my endeavor and hope that you participate
taking feed to my need so i might just appreciate

i putting this down
still not a put down
i'm making good ground
such a sweet sound
hitting up the town
with a new crown
i'm making good round
with the surround sound




Copyright © Daniel ... [ 2002-10-29 18:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Needing (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 10:04:41 PM AEST
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Beautifully written Daniel
Different and unique
I like it, great write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Needing (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 05:57:49 AM AEST
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Great write Danny!!
I especially like the last stanza =:)

Daniela




Re: Needing (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 06:00:44 AM AEST
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Oops... I'm not anonymous!!! =;)

Always,
Dani






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