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Array ( [sid] => 58324 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => break me [time] => 2004-07-31 19:51:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => last night i found a picture of you
and came to a new understanding of you
you laugh in my face, put me in my place,
never get off my case
you try to break me in so many ways

last week you attacked my confidence
talked about things that didn't make sense
it took me all night to stop crying, to realize
you were lying, to know you were trying
to break me in so many ways

last month i might have gone back to you
if i was feeling as desperate as you
but i'm not that weak, don't need you to make
me complete, i've got you beat
you can't break me in anyway

last year we nearly killed each other
we barely made it through the summer
i couldn't make myself love you, couldn't make
either of us stay true, you had nothing else
to do
but break me in so many ways

today we talked on the phone
your voice sounded so alone
why do you say you hate me, with
such sincerity, let your heart be free
you don't need to break me anymore [comments] => 7 [counter] => 248 [topic] => 65 [informant] => priss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

break me

Contributed by priss on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 07:51:38 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

last night i found a picture of you
and came to a new understanding of you
you laugh in my face, put me in my place,
never get off my case
you try to break me in so many ways

last week you attacked my confidence
talked about things that didn't make sense
it took me all night to stop crying, to realize
you were lying, to know you were trying
to break me in so many ways

last month i might have gone back to you
if i was feeling as desperate as you
but i'm not that weak, don't need you to make
me complete, i've got you beat
you can't break me in anyway

last year we nearly killed each other
we barely made it through the summer
i couldn't make myself love you, couldn't make
either of us stay true, you had nothing else
to do
but break me in so many ways

today we talked on the phone
your voice sounded so alone
why do you say you hate me, with
such sincerity, let your heart be free
you don't need to break me anymore

Copyright © priss ... [ 2004-07-31 19:51:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: break me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:01:13 PM AEST
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Sad but written well.
I can relate as my ex finally gave up on trying to break me.
someone that can't except u as is then u don't need um. We are all individuals here and no one has the right to try-n-break us.
good work.
luv, huggs, smiles, stay strong,
emy

Re: break me (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:32:23 PM AEST
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very sad and emotional write

Brandy

Re: break me (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 09:59:21 PM AEST
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EXCELLENT WRITE! i can relate to this one so well. youve expressed it to its greatest extent. well done.

Re: break me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 05:17:11 AM AEST
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such a touching write, I am sorry for your pain,

takecare
pixie xx

Re: break me (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 04:54:46 PM AEST
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PRISS - THIS IS SO BEAUTIFULL- IT GAVE ME CHILLS - I LOVE IT

Re: break me (User Rating: 1 )
by artjunkiekyle on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 01:16:17 PM AEST
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Evil people will always roam the earth and continue to try and break others. Never let them get you down- I've learned that the hard way.
Peace, love, and bubblegum!!!

Re: break me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 05:58:32 AM AEST
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Coming back and reading your old stuff I seem to get the impression that you're walking in sunshine and not so breakable anymore. Experience can some time be the ugliest teacher. This, although sad, is very tender and insightful.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

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