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Array ( [sid] => 58297 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => YOUR LITTLE GIRL [time] => 2004-07-31 14:39:23 [hometext] => FOR MY BELOVED TOMMY...I WISH HE WAS HERE FOR HIS CHILD.... [bodytext] => MY HEART IS IN PAIN,
I LISTEN TO THE RAIN,
I HELD UR CHILD CLOSE TO MY HEART
SHE'S FEELIN HER FIRST BROKEN HEART...
I AM NOT HER MOTHER...JUST THE ONE WHO LOVED HER FATHER.
BUT WHEN SHE NEEDS HELP...SHE ALWAYS TURNS TO ME
HOW CAN I EASE HER PAIN...WHEN I KNOW IT WILL HAPPEN AGAIN
WHAT WOULD U TELL HER..WHAT SHOULD I DO...
HOW DO I HELP HER...WHEN SHE JUST SAID SHE NEEDED U.
SO I TELL HER THAT IS TRUE...
AND THAT I TO NEED U...WE CRY TOGETHER...
SHE LOOKES AT ME WITH UR GREEN EYES...
"HE WOULD HOLD US BOTH AND DRY OUR TEARS"
I TELL HER ONE DAY SHE WONT HURT FOR HIM ANYMORE,
AND ONE DAY SHE'LL FIND LOVE THE WILL MAKE HER FLY,
BECAUSE ONE DAY I FOUND U...AND U MADE MY HEART TOUCH THE SKY...
WHEN GOD TOOK U..
MY BLUE SKIES TURNED GRAY,
BUT LIFE GOES ON WE'VE LEARNED THIS TO BE TRUE,
NOT ONE DAY GOES BY THAT WE DON'T MISS U...
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 22 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
YOUR LITTLE GIRL

Contributed by brokenwings on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:39:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



MY HEART IS IN PAIN,
I LISTEN TO THE RAIN,
I HELD UR CHILD CLOSE TO MY HEART
SHE'S FEELIN HER FIRST BROKEN HEART...
I AM NOT HER MOTHER...JUST THE ONE WHO LOVED HER FATHER.
BUT WHEN SHE NEEDS HELP...SHE ALWAYS TURNS TO ME
HOW CAN I EASE HER PAIN...WHEN I KNOW IT WILL HAPPEN AGAIN
WHAT WOULD U TELL HER..WHAT SHOULD I DO...
HOW DO I HELP HER...WHEN SHE JUST SAID SHE NEEDED U.
SO I TELL HER THAT IS TRUE...
AND THAT I TO NEED U...WE CRY TOGETHER...
SHE LOOKES AT ME WITH UR GREEN EYES...
"HE WOULD HOLD US BOTH AND DRY OUR TEARS"
I TELL HER ONE DAY SHE WONT HURT FOR HIM ANYMORE,
AND ONE DAY SHE'LL FIND LOVE THE WILL MAKE HER FLY,
BECAUSE ONE DAY I FOUND U...AND U MADE MY HEART TOUCH THE SKY...
WHEN GOD TOOK U..
MY BLUE SKIES TURNED GRAY,
BUT LIFE GOES ON WE'VE LEARNED THIS TO BE TRUE,
NOT ONE DAY GOES BY THAT WE DON'T MISS U...




Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2004-07-31 14:39:23]
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Re: YOUR LITTLE GIRL (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:51:00 PM AEST
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Awww this is so touching.....made me want to cry... You are both lucky to have each other...
Hugs
Jenni


Re: YOUR LITTLE GIRL (User Rating: 1 )
by bttrflynajar on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 03:28:43 PM AEST
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what a heartfelt poem, made me to want to cry, sounds like something out of a movie. nicley done.


Re: YOUR LITTLE GIRL (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 03:34:56 PM AEST
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What wonderful HEART WARMING poem. Although your beloved is no longer phisically with you or his duaghter, someday, you shall be with him in heaven. Keep Your Head Held High. (((HUGS)))


Re: YOUR LITTLE GIRL (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 05:33:55 PM AEST
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Aww, this is so beautiful. It's so sad though
Great write

~Jenna


Re: YOUR LITTLE GIRL (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 05:21:56 AM AEST
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awww a very very sad and moving write, I am so sorry for your loss *hugs*

pixie xx




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