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Array ( [sid] => 58260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Oceans of Thought [time] => 2004-07-31 02:09:42 [hometext] => Someone gave me the idea for this poem, and I took it from there the best I could [bodytext] => Oceans of thought
Waves of immagination
All things brought
By this location

The gentle rythm
The waves lapping on sand
Makes life interesting
It never seems bland

The relaxing effect
The soothing feel
Makes thoughts happy
Helping to heal

Never ending ocean
Never ending blue
Makes you wonder
What would Giligan do

Bluer than the sky
Teeming with life
Animals seem to live
Without much strife

I pick up a rock
Flat as can be
And skip it accross
This vibrant sea

As night falls
The suns reflection does shine
More beatiful than a mighty oak
Or even the greenest pine

Night is here
Bliss is all around
Not a problem here
Not one to be found

The moon does shine
Sparse clouds overhead
The night wouldn't be more alive
Even if it bled

As the night slowy screeps by
Harmony reigns
Only for the day to come
And start the circle again [comments] => 6 [counter] => 264 [topic] => 43 [informant] => kyletycz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Oceans of Thought

Contributed by kyletycz on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:09:42 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Oceans of thought
Waves of immagination
All things brought
By this location

The gentle rythm
The waves lapping on sand
Makes life interesting
It never seems bland

The relaxing effect
The soothing feel
Makes thoughts happy
Helping to heal

Never ending ocean
Never ending blue
Makes you wonder
What would Giligan do

Bluer than the sky
Teeming with life
Animals seem to live
Without much strife

I pick up a rock
Flat as can be
And skip it accross
This vibrant sea

As night falls
The suns reflection does shine
More beatiful than a mighty oak
Or even the greenest pine

Night is here
Bliss is all around
Not a problem here
Not one to be found

The moon does shine
Sparse clouds overhead
The night wouldn't be more alive
Even if it bled

As the night slowy screeps by
Harmony reigns
Only for the day to come
And start the circle again




Copyright © kyletycz ... [ 2004-07-31 02:09:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Oceans of Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:19:38 AM AEST
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Aww very sweet , beautiful and delightful write..keep writing on. venkat


Re: Oceans of Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:24:02 AM AEST
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Well I'd say u took the idea and turned it into a marvalous masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Oceans of Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by cauchy3 on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 04:22:50 AM AEST
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Very good poems .But do you run after the moon just left behind the sun


Re: Oceans of Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 05:47:24 AM AEST
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Wow!! Great write!!! Great imagery.....I loved this very much.
Welcome to YPDC....Good to have you aboard...
Jenni


Re: Oceans of Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:23:09 AM AEST
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this is beautiful very good write, look forward to reading more,

pixie xx


Re: Oceans of Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 06:02:11 PM AEST
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absolutely gorgeous poem, beautifully written:) hugs n' love nessa

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