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Array ( [sid] => 58258 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LOST WHILE SITTING STILL [time] => 2004-07-31 01:54:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Before me lies a dark and dreary path
I look but am afraid to see
I know we must all face the wrath
With hopes of someday being free

Sitting here in the dark all alone
With no one to turn to and no where to go
In the distance, I hear a moan,
It is only a cry from deep within my soul

If I could do it again, I’d change it all
Just to go back to that happy place,
Then I wouldn’t have taken this fall,
With my greatest fears staring me in the face.

Always alone
No where to go
Hearing the moan
A cry from my soul

There is no happy place!!!!
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LOST WHILE SITTING STILL

Contributed by KrIsTa2216 on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:54:41 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Before me lies a dark and dreary path
I look but am afraid to see
I know we must all face the wrath
With hopes of someday being free

Sitting here in the dark all alone
With no one to turn to and no where to go
In the distance, I hear a moan,
It is only a cry from deep within my soul

If I could do it again, I’d change it all
Just to go back to that happy place,
Then I wouldn’t have taken this fall,
With my greatest fears staring me in the face.

Always alone
No where to go
Hearing the moan
A cry from my soul

There is no happy place!!!!

Copyright Â© KrIsTa2216 ... [ 2004-07-31 01:54:41]
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Re: LOST WHILE SITTING STILL (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:12:22 AM AEST
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Hindsight is aalways better than fore sight.
Very sad but written well.
huggs,
emy

Re: LOST WHILE SITTING STILL (User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:15:05 AM AEST
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it always sucks to go through life regretting something, but i know how hard it can be to put things behind you when they mean so much to you...

nice write...

Re: LOST WHILE SITTING STILL (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:33:17 AM AEST
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Believe me, there is a happy place. It's you who has to gather the strength to go out and find it. Good write. Take care!

Kimberly :)

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