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Array ( [sid] => 58234 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hope to Sleep [time] => 2004-07-30 20:58:08 [hometext] => Hope you like it....Please Comment!!! [bodytext] => I just hope to sleep
Never to be awaken
Because nothing in this world
Can replace what you have taken

So here I am cold and alone
Watching as my blood falls fast
Why does it always come to this?
How long can this pain really last?

It’s just so painful
I wish you would come back
I need you in my life
Your love is what I lack

I need you in my arms again
I need you by my side
Your always in my dreams at night
In them I’m your bride

The dreams i have of you
Are better than my reality
I just want to sleep forever
And it’s killing my mentality
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Hope to Sleep

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:58:08 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I just hope to sleep
Never to be awaken
Because nothing in this world
Can replace what you have taken

So here I am cold and alone
Watching as my blood falls fast
Why does it always come to this?
How long can this pain really last?

It’s just so painful
I wish you would come back
I need you in my life
Your love is what I lack

I need you in my arms again
I need you by my side
Your always in my dreams at night
In them I’m your bride

The dreams i have of you
Are better than my reality
I just want to sleep forever
And it’s killing my mentality

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-07-30 20:58:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hope to Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:18:29 PM AEST
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ct,
how sad this is. there is more to life than just what any one person can give. always know you hold your own inner power. and there are many other people caring about you.

the voice

great piece!

Re: Hope to Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by MyLastBreath on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:18:55 PM AEST
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I can relate :( Hope things look up for you soon.

Peace

Re: Hope to Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:47:01 AM AEST
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powerful and very sad write, great expression used in your write *hugs you*

pixie xx

Re: Hope to Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:09:33 PM AEST
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I can relate to this, to some extent,
made me feel very empty and cold
made me teary

Re: Hope to Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:22:05 PM AEST
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oh! such a sad write.
you expressed your-self well though...
from deathdrop.

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