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Array ( [sid] => 58211 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In need of love [time] => 2004-07-30 15:46:21 [hometext] => This poem was written to my first true love. Tell Me what you think... [bodytext] => I knew it had to be love
even before first sight.
Starting with little things
like talking on the phone all night.
So go ahead, open up your chest
and let me sink deep into your heart
So that our love would spread like a disease
and we would never be apart.
Willing to love you and cherish you
for as long as we're together
And if nothing goes wrong,
it just might last forever.
But for you that may seem too long
so let me know if i'm coming on too strong.
I just want to cover your heart like a glove
because you're the man i've always wished i had
...in my life so fill me with all your love,
through the good times and the bad.
For loving you is a crime that i'm willing to commit
but only if you are sure you can handle it.
This may seem like a poem,
Even more like a plea
Crying out desperately
For someone to love me
So could it possibly be?
That it is he...
That I am in need of love from [comments] => 5 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ms_superior [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

In need of love

Contributed by ms_superior on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:46:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I knew it had to be love
even before first sight.
Starting with little things
like talking on the phone all night.
So go ahead, open up your chest
and let me sink deep into your heart
So that our love would spread like a disease
and we would never be apart.
Willing to love you and cherish you
for as long as we're together
And if nothing goes wrong,
it just might last forever.
But for you that may seem too long
so let me know if i'm coming on too strong.
I just want to cover your heart like a glove
because you're the man i've always wished i had
...in my life so fill me with all your love,
through the good times and the bad.
For loving you is a crime that i'm willing to commit
but only if you are sure you can handle it.
This may seem like a poem,
Even more like a plea
Crying out desperately
For someone to love me
So could it possibly be?
That it is he...
That I am in need of love from

Copyright © ms_superior ... [ 2004-07-30 15:46:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: In need of love (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:53:28 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem, I love how you described sinking into his heart, and spreading love like a disease. pure talent.

Kimberly :)

Re: In need of love (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 04:04:15 PM AEST
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You are a very good poem writer and you expressed your feelings well. Have you shown him this poem yet?. Go after what you wan't okay and I wish you the best!!!.-luckycharm.

Re: In need of love (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 04:51:34 PM AEST
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Very sweet indeed, who could resist such a plea for that heart.

Beautiful write, thank you for sharing.

Re: In need of love (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 05:13:48 PM AEST
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Lovely poem..........such hope and love!

Re: In need of love (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 09:01:50 AM AEST
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a beautiful and loving write, really liked it..

pixie xx

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