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Array ( [sid] => 58174 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Losing It [time] => 2004-07-30 11:13:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I dont know where to begin,
with all these mixed thoughts and emotions,
all this hate, anger,confusion
I dont know what to think of myself anymore,
What am I? Who am I?

I useto be so happy,
Now I am always angry and tired,
Instead of cheerfully going to sleep snugglying my head in my soft pillow,
I cry silently to myself hating everything and everyone.

I useto love life and everything about it,
Now I loath life and everything and everyone about it,
Is it just a phase I am going through?
What kind of phase would make me want to feel and do all this?

I cant take it any more.
all this pain and grief,
Ive lost everything and everyone Ive ever loved or had,
All for a stupid little mistake....

I hate you bastards!
Thinking you can get away with all the *** youve done to me and everyone I care for,
Prancing around while everyone around you suffers,
I cant take it!

NONE OF IT!

hopefully this doesnt send me to hell..... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 43 [informant] => xRotten_Insidex [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Losing It

Contributed by xRotten_Insidex on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 11:13:47 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I dont know where to begin,
with all these mixed thoughts and emotions,
all this hate, anger,confusion
I dont know what to think of myself anymore,
What am I? Who am I?

I useto be so happy,
Now I am always angry and tired,
Instead of cheerfully going to sleep snugglying my head in my soft pillow,
I cry silently to myself hating everything and everyone.

I useto love life and everything about it,
Now I loath life and everything and everyone about it,
Is it just a phase I am going through?
What kind of phase would make me want to feel and do all this?

I cant take it any more.
all this pain and grief,
Ive lost everything and everyone Ive ever loved or had,
All for a stupid little mistake....

I hate you bastards!
Thinking you can get away with all the *** youve done to me and everyone I care for,
Prancing around while everyone around you suffers,
I cant take it!

NONE OF IT!

hopefully this doesnt send me to hell.....

Copyright © xRotten_Insidex ... [ 2004-07-30 11:13:47]
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Re: Losing It (User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:29:23 PM AEST
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I know how it feels to be so confused inside, to now know who you are anymore..... its good that you are expressing yourself... the more you do, the better you will understand whats going on inside your head.

PEACE

Re: Losing It (User Rating: 1 )
by ham323 on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 07:34:37 PM AEST
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You and me both. Seems like things are meant to suck.

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