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Array ( [sid] => 58170 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FIRST TIME OUR PATHS CROSSED [time] => 2004-07-30 09:30:24 [hometext] => FOR MY EX WHO WAS SURPRISED I DIDN'T MELT WHEN HE CAME NEAR ME ...HOPE U ALL ENJOY [bodytext] => U LEFT AND BROKE MY HEART
U TOLD ME I DID NOT LOVE U.
JUST THE OTHER NIGHT OUR PATHS CROSSED
AND U LOOKED LIKE U WERE SURPRISED
THAT THERE WERE NO TEARS IN MY EYES.
THERE WONT BE ANY TEARS FOR U TO SEE.
I HAVE CRYED MY LAST TEAR FOR U.
I DON'T KNOW WHY U HAD TO END WHAT WE HAD,
BUT I WON'T SIT HERE ALL DAY AND JUST BE SAD.
U ASKED HOW I WAS DOING, DID U LIKE THE ANSWER U GOT.
I TOLD U I'M DOING JUST FINE.
U LOOKED IN MY EYES I FELT MY HEART MELT.
THEN I REMEMBERED ALL THE TEARS I ONCE FELT
GO AWAY
LEAVE ME BE
COZ FOR ONCE MY SOUL IS FREE...
U WANTED ME TO FORGET HIM
WHO WAS ALL I HAD TO DEPEND ON
U WANTED TO PLAY UR GAMES
NOW ITS FUNNY WHEN U CALL ME NAMES.
GROW UP
LEARN IT WAS UR FAULT.
LET ME BE
I AM FREE///
LEAVE NOW THERES NOTHING HERE FOR U NOW
MAYBE NEXT TIME OUR PATHS CROSS
U WILL TRUELY SEE IT WAS UR LOSS... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 6 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
FIRST TIME OUR PATHS CROSSED

Contributed by brokenwings on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:30:24 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



U LEFT AND BROKE MY HEART
U TOLD ME I DID NOT LOVE U.
JUST THE OTHER NIGHT OUR PATHS CROSSED
AND U LOOKED LIKE U WERE SURPRISED
THAT THERE WERE NO TEARS IN MY EYES.
THERE WONT BE ANY TEARS FOR U TO SEE.
I HAVE CRYED MY LAST TEAR FOR U.
I DON'T KNOW WHY U HAD TO END WHAT WE HAD,
BUT I WON'T SIT HERE ALL DAY AND JUST BE SAD.
U ASKED HOW I WAS DOING, DID U LIKE THE ANSWER U GOT.
I TOLD U I'M DOING JUST FINE.
U LOOKED IN MY EYES I FELT MY HEART MELT.
THEN I REMEMBERED ALL THE TEARS I ONCE FELT
GO AWAY
LEAVE ME BE
COZ FOR ONCE MY SOUL IS FREE...
U WANTED ME TO FORGET HIM
WHO WAS ALL I HAD TO DEPEND ON
U WANTED TO PLAY UR GAMES
NOW ITS FUNNY WHEN U CALL ME NAMES.
GROW UP
LEARN IT WAS UR FAULT.
LET ME BE
I AM FREE///
LEAVE NOW THERES NOTHING HERE FOR U NOW
MAYBE NEXT TIME OUR PATHS CROSS
U WILL TRUELY SEE IT WAS UR LOSS...




Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2004-07-30 09:30:24]
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Re: FIRST TIME OUR PATHS CROSSED (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:36:18 AM AEST
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Emotional write. I felt this way a couple of years ago about a guy. But I eventually got over it. And im glad you did too!


Kimberly :)


Re: FIRST TIME OUR PATHS CROSSED (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFawn on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 10:28:58 AM AEST
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Very well expressed emotions. Great job.

WinterFawn


Re: FIRST TIME OUR PATHS CROSSED (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 10:49:33 AM AEST
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Beautifully and emotionally well expressed....
Jenni


Re: FIRST TIME OUR PATHS CROSSED (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 10:54:32 AM AEST
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Very good poem and good atitude.




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