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Before I know it, it was a kiss goodbye,
If to be with you was to live a lie,
Then really should I live or die?

A mindless act could brake my heart,
Like a shooting arrow or a poisoned dart,
but it was already planned right from the start,
we'd be together, and then we'd part,

Was I ever made for you?,
was the love with 'had' too true?,
did I not just take the clue?,
cos now im feeling down and blue,

Don't want you back, don't need you here,
I'm living my life without no fear,
Never need to whipe a tear,
I'm fine alone, and now it's clear.

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Now It's clear

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:52:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

A kiss hello was to make me cry,
Before I know it, it was a kiss goodbye,
If to be with you was to live a lie,
Then really should I live or die?

A mindless act could brake my heart,
Like a shooting arrow or a poisoned dart,
but it was already planned right from the start,
we'd be together, and then we'd part,

Was I ever made for you?,
was the love with 'had' too true?,
did I not just take the clue?,
cos now im feeling down and blue,

Don't want you back, don't need you here,
I'm living my life without no fear,
Never need to whipe a tear,
I'm fine alone, and now it's clear.

Copyright © corrupted_minds ... [ 2004-07-30 06:52:00]
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Re: Now It's clear (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 07:07:24 AM AEST
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this is very sad and emotional... not bad for 5 mins work eh?? lol

great write,

pixie xx

Re: Now It's clear (User Rating: 1 )
by srsuckow on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:25:39 AM AEST
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You vocalize exactly how I'm feeling in this moment... Great job!

Re: Now It's clear (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:31:56 AM AEST
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Good write. Im glad you became strong to overcome this. I like the first verse.

Kimberly :)

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