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Array ( [sid] => 58084 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rock Bottom [time] => 2004-07-29 16:20:30 [hometext] => sorry i havent writtin in a whie to those of you who enjoy my work, ive moved to a differnt home, so all the packing kept me off the computer! [bodytext] => i've dug as far as i can
i have hit rock bottom

cant no longer go further
this is it

i feel so caged
i can only go in circles

trapped in a dark hole
the one i dug myself

i cant cope with all the lies and secrecy
i cant break through the soil of this retched earth

what can i do
when im trapped

i feel so small
i feel so alone

crying myself to sleep
it never helps

i need to breathe
i need to be myself again

but how can i when change incircles me
and plays with my brittle mind

i need the strength
i have to go on

why should i
whats the point

i need to life
i can never give up

why is this so confusing
how can i change and move on

i have changed
i dont know if i can move on

ive hit rock bottom
all i can do now is try to dig up [comments] => 2 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 13 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Rock Bottom

Contributed by TwEeK on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:20:30 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



i've dug as far as i can
i have hit rock bottom

cant no longer go further
this is it

i feel so caged
i can only go in circles

trapped in a dark hole
the one i dug myself

i cant cope with all the lies and secrecy
i cant break through the soil of this retched earth

what can i do
when im trapped

i feel so small
i feel so alone

crying myself to sleep
it never helps

i need to breathe
i need to be myself again

but how can i when change incircles me
and plays with my brittle mind

i need the strength
i have to go on

why should i
whats the point

i need to life
i can never give up

why is this so confusing
how can i change and move on

i have changed
i dont know if i can move on

ive hit rock bottom
all i can do now is try to dig up




Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-07-29 16:20:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Rock Bottom (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:24:37 PM AEST
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welcome back I'd wondered where you had gone, but what a poem to come back with.... very good write Tweek,

takecare,

pixie xx


Re: Rock Bottom (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:28:17 PM AEST
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nice write, first one of yours i've read, and it wasn't a disappointment. looking forward to more

~Jekyll




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