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Array ( [sid] => 58070 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => to tim- it's over [time] => 2004-07-29 14:26:23 [hometext] => we've been married for 5 yrs, and this dude had been living with and taking care of someone for 6 months and i didn't know a thing...pretty naive, huh? [bodytext] => I thought things would be better
I was reading everything backward and upside down
I came back to express regret and forgiveness
and I am stabbed in the back- hatred is what I've found.

And for you, I have no sort of sympathy
now that I know
you were never there for me.
You have been placed to the bottom.
You are noone.
You are forgotten.
Don't come with me with words that are humle.
I have seen your actions...
you have killed me, but not longer will I stumble
on my own fleeting thoughts of us.

My heart is crushed, scattered
left to blow away like dust...

But you know you have made me strong.
Depressing self-pity,
well, that's not where I belong.
Though at first, I wanted to die
I have finally
said goodbye.
I put our love in the past.
It is over- a memory
that I hope not to last.... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 22 [informant] => emeraldeyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
to tim- it's over

Contributed by emeraldeyes on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 02:26:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I thought things would be better
I was reading everything backward and upside down
I came back to express regret and forgiveness
and I am stabbed in the back- hatred is what I've found.

And for you, I have no sort of sympathy
now that I know
you were never there for me.
You have been placed to the bottom.
You are noone.
You are forgotten.
Don't come with me with words that are humle.
I have seen your actions...
you have killed me, but not longer will I stumble
on my own fleeting thoughts of us.

My heart is crushed, scattered
left to blow away like dust...

But you know you have made me strong.
Depressing self-pity,
well, that's not where I belong.
Though at first, I wanted to die
I have finally
said goodbye.
I put our love in the past.
It is over- a memory
that I hope not to last....




Copyright © emeraldeyes ... [ 2004-07-29 14:26:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: to tim- it's over (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 02:32:13 PM AEST
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I am really sorry for your pain....this poem is filled with raw emotional heartache and hurt....

*hugs*
takecare,
pixie xx


Re: to tim- it's over (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:29:27 PM AEST
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This was excellent! You did an awesome job on this. --the Moth




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