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Inside my house as the others romp

Your hard drive is so very dear to me
Better than an ocean cruise of the seas

Blackouts during storms make you silent
I sit staring at your monitor and repent

Midnights to the bathroom tripping over a dog
Return to bed ? Ha! Online we must log!

Sometimes I long to hear your little 'ping'
Only you can do this for me it is like you sing

In my darkest hours of breaking loneliness
We can go online together; utter happiness

Throughout the Ages we travel in time
Your my best friend O' puter of mine

Sad opperations when you had to go away
Me waiting 4-U with open arms in the driveway

Donations to our brilliant tech well spent
This man who U+me know the Angels sent

Then it happened, I know you felt it too, You
lit up in that magic moment and again time flew

I think I am madly in love with my puter
And it must be a guy 'cause otherwise I'd
Shoot her.

Copyright © ladyfawn 2001 [comments] => 9 [counter] => 302 [topic] => 7 [informant] => ladyfawn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 75 [ratings] => 15 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

My Puter

Contributed by ladyfawn on Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 06:54:52 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

Your mouse the only one I want
Inside my house as the others romp

Your hard drive is so very dear to me
Better than an ocean cruise of the seas

Blackouts during storms make you silent
I sit staring at your monitor and repent

Midnights to the bathroom tripping over a dog
Return to bed ? Ha! Online we must log!

Sometimes I long to hear your little 'ping'
Only you can do this for me it is like you sing

In my darkest hours of breaking loneliness
We can go online together; utter happiness

Throughout the Ages we travel in time
Your my best friend O' puter of mine

Sad opperations when you had to go away
Me waiting 4-U with open arms in the driveway

Donations to our brilliant tech well spent
This man who U+me know the Angels sent

Then it happened, I know you felt it too, You
lit up in that magic moment and again time flew

I think I am madly in love with my puter
And it must be a guy 'cause otherwise I'd
Shoot her.

Copyright © ladyfawn 2001

Copyright Â© ladyfawn ... [ 2002-07-11 06:54:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Puter (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 07:11:23 AM AEST
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Dearest Nessa,
You've made my day!! I know just how you feel....I'm still giggling at this wonderful poem.
So glad to read your work again.
Much love
Chrissie xx

Re: My Puter (User Rating: 1 )
by S_K_Williamson on Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 07:24:53 AM AEST
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Nessa,
I was so glad to see you posted. I have had a tad of a time getting to post this but I will keep working on it until I get it right...lol
You write wonderfuly...I can relate to this one...big time.
Great write my friend,
Sharon;)

Re: My Puter (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 04:16:05 PM AEST
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Oh it's great!!! I always loved your poetry!!! This one is as cute as My Darling Wolverine that you had on the old site. {My mom loved that one too} I'm so glad to be reading other people's poetry on this site again! I've missed it!!! Thanks for the terrific poem! *hugs*
Gin

Re: My Puter (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 06:29:36 PM AEST
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I wouldn't put myself online for anyone but you and all the other million onliners.....hehehe
Lol, I know what you mean, my offline friends thought I had hibernated once. I limit myself now, as I am torn between my pc and clothes shopping......a difficult choice.
Great poem.

Re: My Puter (User Rating: 1 )
by Kassidi on Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 04:31:15 PM AEST
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Ladyfawn, (Or should I say Nessa)
This was another lovely poem, and like everybody else I can relate to this. WONDERFUL write! :D
Kassidi

Re: My Puter (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 10:20:54 AM AEST
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LOL, Truely wonderful. You have captured the feelings we all here must feel.

wordsy.

Re: My Puter (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 02:15:03 AM AEST
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Dear Ladyfawn, I enjoyed this poem so much!
So cute and humorous and true, too! Bbizzy

Re: My Puter (User Rating: 1 )
by darbysue59 on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 01:43:03 PM AEST
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cute i loved this,and it made me laugh,can i borrow your gun

Re: My Puter (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 08:34:53 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa, my sweet friend, I loved this. I thought it was extremely cute. *S* Cynthia

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