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Array ( [sid] => 57975 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Trouble in Heaven [time] => 2004-07-28 20:58:45 [hometext] => This is dedicated to My little brother and Niece; Lean and Morgan who drowned in 97' written by my older brother Dallas [bodytext] => He was barely two years old
still not knowing right from wrong
my little buddy, your little fan
his daddy always called him his little man

She was younger by a year or two
I still remembered the way she looked at you
an american mother, and a mexican dad
I can only imagine the dreams she had

I was working grave yards at taco bell
just seventeen about to go through hell
you came home, woke me up
youd just worked a double I can see you looked rough
youd asked me to watch the little ones
so we wathed tv and had some fun
then I dosed off and hell begun

there must have been trouble in heaven that day
cuz the lord open his gates
and took your two angels away
why he took both I dont understand
maybe its part of his masterplan
to hold one in each one of his hands

Im still hurting here on earth
Im so sorry for all its worth
six years gone by not a lot has changed
I still feel guilty, I still feel the blame
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Trouble in Heaven

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 08:58:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



He was barely two years old
still not knowing right from wrong
my little buddy, your little fan
his daddy always called him his little man

She was younger by a year or two
I still remembered the way she looked at you
an american mother, and a mexican dad
I can only imagine the dreams she had

I was working grave yards at taco bell
just seventeen about to go through hell
you came home, woke me up
youd just worked a double I can see you looked rough
youd asked me to watch the little ones
so we wathed tv and had some fun
then I dosed off and hell begun

there must have been trouble in heaven that day
cuz the lord open his gates
and took your two angels away
why he took both I dont understand
maybe its part of his masterplan
to hold one in each one of his hands

Im still hurting here on earth
Im so sorry for all its worth
six years gone by not a lot has changed
I still feel guilty, I still feel the blame




Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-07-28 20:58:45]
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Re: Trouble in Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:32:35 PM AEST
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wow, so terribly sad. so much to deal with. may God bring you and all involved peace.


the voice


Re: Trouble in Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:22:36 PM AEST
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Amen. I agree with The Voice... this is sad and terrible... but hang in there... God has a plan and I'll bet peace is involved somewhere in it. I'll be praying for u and ur family.
~Donna~


Re: Trouble in Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:34:37 PM AEST
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I Love This Poem. I Can Say This Is Very Good.


Re: Trouble in Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:50:15 PM AEST
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This hit me hard for my daughters name is Leann,I cant imagine what your going through all I know is I hope you will find peace,It wasnt your fault.Christina


Re: Trouble in Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 06:51:22 AM AEST
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omg this is so sad, i feel very down after reading this, I cant for one minute imagine how this must feel *hugs*

I am sorry for your losses

pixie xx




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