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Array ( [sid] => 57953 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => break through the living [time] => 2004-07-28 17:07:33 [hometext] => i feel like im going mad,living with my family,arguments everyday,i know u'll tell me i can get through this,my counciller said that too,and he failed me,an i have confidence,that my family will too,they make me feel worthless,and i want to break away!!!! [bodytext] => with a broken heart
and bright red tears flowing down my cheeks
i rock back and forth on my death bed
its night always and the sun doesnt shine through the curtains
my soul has broke through the living
and im left,bewilded and feeling like death
you tore my soul to shreds
you splintered my heart
and scarred my skin
the wounds will not heal
the scars will not fade
the aching will not stop
i watch in horror
as you take the knife
and press it to your vein
the blood squirts
and i know your enjoying
killing me,through emotional blackmail
the blood turns black
and you make me drink
i cry
and you shout
you scream
if you scream any louder
will your throat bulge and your voice box erupt?!
you've killed my only other oulet
now the only option is real,beautiful,death...
whispers in my head
have eventually grew louder
and the demons,who bear their teeth and run wild
have become clearer
i use to laugh
but i cant remember how it felt
i destroy my eyes
with the acid tears
bloody and cold
they drip
and flow down my body
im mutilated
and deformed
inside i mean
you have turned innocience
into thilf
im dirty all over
i wont ever be clean
i stained my skin
bleached white
and i still feel used and dirty
i hold my hand in my hands
and cry out
'please,please,help me,provent this life,let me break through the living....and reach the dead,please God,if you've their listen please...please....'
you leave
and im left
staring into the night
thinking
about murderous thoughts that you drove into me...




[comments] => 3 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 59 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
break through the living

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 05:07:33 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



with a broken heart
and bright red tears flowing down my cheeks
i rock back and forth on my death bed
its night always and the sun doesnt shine through the curtains
my soul has broke through the living
and im left,bewilded and feeling like death
you tore my soul to shreds
you splintered my heart
and scarred my skin
the wounds will not heal
the scars will not fade
the aching will not stop
i watch in horror
as you take the knife
and press it to your vein
the blood squirts
and i know your enjoying
killing me,through emotional blackmail
the blood turns black
and you make me drink
i cry
and you shout
you scream
if you scream any louder
will your throat bulge and your voice box erupt?!
you've killed my only other oulet
now the only option is real,beautiful,death...
whispers in my head
have eventually grew louder
and the demons,who bear their teeth and run wild
have become clearer
i use to laugh
but i cant remember how it felt
i destroy my eyes
with the acid tears
bloody and cold
they drip
and flow down my body
im mutilated
and deformed
inside i mean
you have turned innocience
into thilf
im dirty all over
i wont ever be clean
i stained my skin
bleached white
and i still feel used and dirty
i hold my hand in my hands
and cry out
'please,please,help me,provent this life,let me break through the living....and reach the dead,please God,if you've their listen please...please....'
you leave
and im left
staring into the night
thinking
about murderous thoughts that you drove into me...








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Re: break through the living (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 05:33:11 PM AEST
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I thought you were very creative here. Pretty cool.--Mothy


Re: break through the living (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 05:54:38 PM AEST
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this was really great I loved it from start to finish. good job

Brandy


Re: break through the living (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 06:59:01 PM AEST
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that's really good. you should PM me or add me to MSN or something cause i feel like I can relate to you a lot.

I like the "acid tears" and the "break through the living" parts the best




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