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Array ( [sid] => 57939 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For Our Love [time] => 2004-07-28 15:43:10 [hometext] => Hey, i'm new here and I thought i'd submit one of my poems to you guys, this is one I wrote for my girlfriend Sandra, I haven't used it yet but i'll let ya'll know. [bodytext] => Walking through life
At a slow and steady pace.
May be a secure way,
But it is not my place.

For content you must take action,
Or life shall slip away
If you do not take a chance
Short, will be your days.

Happiness is sometimes known,
Right from the start.
But sometimes it takes a while
To get to some ones heart.

Four basic qualities
For relationships that are a must,
Are happiness, honesty, love,
And trust.

Happiness is laughter,
With smiles everyday!

Honesty is openness,
No lies to mi bebe!

Love is caring
Which for you I always will.

And trust is knowing I’m the one for you.

All of these we both have,
And they continue to grow.
Closer and closer and closer we get.
And that lets me know!

I love you more than life
More than anything in this world.
Me, your baby boy, and you
You’re my baby girl.

I know that I will be with you,
Until the end of time.
You know for sure that I am yours,
And you are surely mine.

Slow down now,
And listen close,
This is the part that means the most.

Whenever I look into your eyes,
I see the ones of my future wife.
I see the love we will both share.
I see the one who will always care.
I see the love that was meant to be.
I see the one for me.

I want you to answer Honestly,
Are you Happy with me?
I Trust you to choose the right answer,
Do you Love me?

With all these thoughts and feelings
Swarming through your brain.
Answer me this one last question,
But please do no in vain.

With all of my Love, and Happiness,
I Trust you to answer this Honestly,
Sandra Edith Vargas,
Will You Marry Me?
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For Our Love

Contributed by Amitron on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:43:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Walking through life
At a slow and steady pace.
May be a secure way,
But it is not my place.

For content you must take action,
Or life shall slip away
If you do not take a chance
Short, will be your days.

Happiness is sometimes known,
Right from the start.
But sometimes it takes a while
To get to some ones heart.

Four basic qualities
For relationships that are a must,
Are happiness, honesty, love,
And trust.

Happiness is laughter,
With smiles everyday!

Honesty is openness,
No lies to mi bebe!

Love is caring
Which for you I always will.

And trust is knowing I’m the one for you.

All of these we both have,
And they continue to grow.
Closer and closer and closer we get.
And that lets me know!

I love you more than life
More than anything in this world.
Me, your baby boy, and you
You’re my baby girl.

I know that I will be with you,
Until the end of time.
You know for sure that I am yours,
And you are surely mine.

Slow down now,
And listen close,
This is the part that means the most.

Whenever I look into your eyes,
I see the ones of my future wife.
I see the love we will both share.
I see the one who will always care.
I see the love that was meant to be.
I see the one for me.

I want you to answer Honestly,
Are you Happy with me?
I Trust you to choose the right answer,
Do you Love me?

With all these thoughts and feelings
Swarming through your brain.
Answer me this one last question,
But please do no in vain.

With all of my Love, and Happiness,
I Trust you to answer this Honestly,
Sandra Edith Vargas,
Will You Marry Me?




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Re: For Our Love (User Rating: 1 )
by co_cane13 on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:56:26 PM AEST
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awesome poem and i didnt see the end coming, let us know if she said yes. i bet she will love you for it.


Re: For Our Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:10:18 PM AEST
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Awwww this is awesome!! How can she not say yes when she reads this!!
Welcome to YPDC family.... Good to have you and your love poetry aboard.... best of luck..
Jenni


Re: For Our Love (User Rating: 1 )
by jmt25607 on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:30:45 PM AEST
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that is so sweet i think she will love it and if she loves you as much as you do her i am sure she will say YES! and i hope she dose so best of luck and i hope you two are happy together for ever keep up the writeing

~jess


Re: For Our Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Amitron on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:37:21 PM AEST
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Hey, its me, just wanted to tell you guys,


SHE SAID YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1




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