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Array ( [sid] => 57907 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take my Hand [time] => 2004-07-28 12:07:49 [hometext] => one night while lying in bed I got an idea and got a pen and paper and just wrote what came to me. This is what I came up with. [bodytext] => Take my hand and lead the way.
Dont talk there are not words to say.

Just guide me through it all.
Guide me so I wont fall.
Take me to a place I have never been.
I just want to get there before it can all end.

Take my hand and lead the way.
Dont talk there are not words to say.

I just want to go where I can be myself.
Not like here like a forgotten book on a shelf.
Bring me to a speical place where I can beat all odds and turn my life around.
I want to be at a place where my feet can be planted firmly on the ground.

Take my hand and lead the way.
Dont talk there are not words to say.

There is such a place, I just have yet to find it.
Once I do find it though, I know it will be worth everything, every single bit.
There is a such place for I know it deep in my heart.
I just dont know where to look or how to start.

So please, just take my hand and lead the way.
Dont talk, for there are no words to say.


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Take my Hand

Contributed by matts_sweetie_04 on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Take my hand and lead the way.
Dont talk there are not words to say.

Just guide me through it all.
Guide me so I wont fall.
Take me to a place I have never been.
I just want to get there before it can all end.

Take my hand and lead the way.
Dont talk there are not words to say.

I just want to go where I can be myself.
Not like here like a forgotten book on a shelf.
Bring me to a speical place where I can beat all odds and turn my life around.
I want to be at a place where my feet can be planted firmly on the ground.

Take my hand and lead the way.
Dont talk there are not words to say.

There is such a place, I just have yet to find it.
Once I do find it though, I know it will be worth everything, every single bit.
There is a such place for I know it deep in my heart.
I just dont know where to look or how to start.

So please, just take my hand and lead the way.
Dont talk, for there are no words to say.






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Re: Take my Hand (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:09:42 PM AEST
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very good write,.....

pixie xx


Re: Take my Hand (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:48:22 PM AEST
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As I read this my mind was flooded with many, many thoughts. It had a lyrical quality to it that was so relaxing to read.

Kie


Re: Take my Hand (User Rating: 1 )
by ExoticDreamer on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:45:01 PM AEST
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Truly there is something to be said for "quality of life" and I think you have hit the nail on the head with this one. Compelling, visual, and wanting. We all need a place where we can be ourselves. Hopefully, that place will be "home". :o) Nicely presented. A pleasure to read.




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