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Array ( [sid] => 57905 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This hate of life [time] => 2004-07-28 11:51:59 [hometext] => comments are greatly appreciated [bodytext] => Dont hate me hate the knife
for cutting me so deep
hate it for making you sad
and hate it for making you weep
hate this knife for ruining my life
and doing the same to yours
hate it for making me cry
and it will help me when i die
hate this knife for making my cuts so deep
for cutting up my wrist
hate it for breaking your heart
when i make it do its part
im slowly leaving and i hope you see
that i still love you and when i die
blame the knife when you cry
-T.S- [comments] => 4 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 36 [informant] => trustisajoke [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

This hate of life

Contributed by trustisajoke on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:51:59 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Dont hate me hate the knife
for cutting me so deep
hate it for making you sad
and hate it for making you weep
hate this knife for ruining my life
and doing the same to yours
hate it for making me cry
and it will help me when i die
hate this knife for making my cuts so deep
for cutting up my wrist
hate it for breaking your heart
when i make it do its part
im slowly leaving and i hope you see
that i still love you and when i die
blame the knife when you cry
-T.S-

Copyright © trustisajoke ... [ 2004-07-28 11:51:59]
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Re: This hate of life (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:53:36 AM AEST
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Awwww I am sorry that you are feeling so bad, you have expressed your pain well,

takecare
pixie xx

Re: This hate of life (User Rating: 1 )
by princess8383 on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:54:27 AM AEST
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Wow.....

Re: This hate of life (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:34:18 PM AEST
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Wow. Great expression of your feelings. Please dont think sucicide is a way out. Believe me I have been there years ago. Take care and God bless!

~sMiLe~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: This hate of life (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:54:57 PM AEST
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yeah tis good. i like how you say to put the blame on the knife not you.

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