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Array ( [sid] => 57897 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Âlways and Forever [time] => 2004-07-28 11:28:24 [hometext] => Comments please:( [bodytext] => When our time is done
im surrounded by feelings
feelings of love and dissapointment
i should of told you i loved you
when i knew out love was true
i should of told you i cared
before what you went through
when my love dies
your beautiful eyes
are what i cant forget
my helpless cries
my unwritten lies
why did you have to go so soon
i wish i could have kissed you
i dream about it every night
i wish i could of hugged you
and always held you tight
i wish you could have loved me
and never let me go
i wish we could have been
there for me
so i could love you so [comments] => 3 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 22 [informant] => trustisajoke [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Âlways and Forever

Contributed by trustisajoke on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:28:24 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

When our time is done
im surrounded by feelings
feelings of love and dissapointment
i should of told you i loved you
when i knew out love was true
i should of told you i cared
before what you went through
when my love dies
your beautiful eyes
are what i cant forget
my helpless cries
my unwritten lies
why did you have to go so soon
i wish i could have kissed you
i dream about it every night
i wish i could of hugged you
and always held you tight
i wish you could have loved me
and never let me go
i wish we could have been
there for me
so i could love you so

Copyright Â© trustisajoke ... [ 2004-07-28 11:28:24]
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Re: Âlways and Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:36:03 AM AEST
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Awwww such a sad and moving poem,

pixie xx

Re: Âlways and Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:49:17 AM AEST
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This is a sad and torturous write. The pangs of your love can be felt for miles!
and btw...I like your screen name.
Angel always...joni

Re: Âlways and Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:52:53 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful poem. The line; 'I wish I could have hugged you and always held you tight i wish you could have loved me and never let me go' hit me hard.

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