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To tell you how I feel,
I’ve loved you since the beginning,
Since then I’ve known it’s real

Just give me one more minute,
In which to say good bye,
I’ll hold my self together,
And just to see me cry,

Just give me one more minute,
To kiss you one last time,
To feel your presence, hold your hand,
with your body next to mine,

Just give me one more minute,
Before you leave for good,
To see your face and touch you’re skin,
And say the things I should,

Just give me one more minute,
Before you reach heavens gate,
For me to stand back and realize,
That crash was all just fate
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JUst give me one more minute

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 06:57:26 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Just give me one more minute,
To tell you how I feel,
I’ve loved you since the beginning,
Since then I’ve known it’s real

Just give me one more minute,
In which to say good bye,
I’ll hold my self together,
And just to see me cry,

Just give me one more minute,
To kiss you one last time,
To feel your presence, hold your hand,
with your body next to mine,

Just give me one more minute,
Before you leave for good,
To see your face and touch you’re skin,
And say the things I should,

Just give me one more minute,
Before you reach heavens gate,
For me to stand back and realize,
That crash was all just fate

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Re: JUst give me one more minute (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 07:02:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful. Maybe one day
you'll get that minute
that you want

Dizza
xoxoxoxoxo

Re: JUst give me one more minute (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:28:05 AM AEST
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So sad to lose one........but have the feelings of love thats divine. Nice write.!

Re: JUst give me one more minute (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:42:03 AM AEST
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Sad tale, but very good!

Re: JUst give me one more minute (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:36:55 AM AEST
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That is such a horrible way to lose a loved one...im soo sry...but this was an amzing write...great job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: JUst give me one more minute (User Rating: 1 )
by baboloki on Thursday, 25th August 2011 @ 10:38:37 PM AEST
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great imagery i can almost see you say goodbye....goooood

Re: JUst give me one more minute (User Rating: 1 )
by baboloki on Thursday, 25th August 2011 @ 10:39:04 PM AEST
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great imagery i can almost see you say goodbye....goooood

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