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Array ( [sid] => 57831 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pink Rose [time] => 2004-07-27 23:10:38 [hometext] => This is a Poem That came to me right away when I thought of my best friend of 16 years [bodytext] => You gave me a rose today
a rose that had its own beauty
it had a smell like a summer rain

it was a nice soft pink rose
a rose of friendship, I said
It's something I would hold close

Close to my heart as friend would do.
All You could do was look me into my
eyes, as I sat there and smelled this beautiful

Rose.
You had a single tear fall from your cheek
as you stood up and took me by my hand
All you could do was cry, you knew I was

Not well, You knew I was just about ready to
Die. I asked you what is wrong my friend?
All you could do was say nothing as you

shook you're head no. I placed this pink
beautiful rose on the table and took your
hand, as we slowly danced to this

Song. I am thankful to have you as my friend
I could not have anyone, who could be
Any better, then you. As I placed my head

on you're shoulder, I heard you whisper something
Into my ear, I said 'What was that?" Then you said it
once again, and here is what you said "Please don't go"




Comment? All rights reserved, © Jennette Miller. Copying without permission for
non-personal use is forbidden [comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Jennette_The_Poet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Pink Rose

Contributed by Jennette_The_Poet on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:10:38 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



You gave me a rose today
a rose that had its own beauty
it had a smell like a summer rain

it was a nice soft pink rose
a rose of friendship, I said
It's something I would hold close

Close to my heart as friend would do.
All You could do was look me into my
eyes, as I sat there and smelled this beautiful

Rose.
You had a single tear fall from your cheek
as you stood up and took me by my hand
All you could do was cry, you knew I was

Not well, You knew I was just about ready to
Die. I asked you what is wrong my friend?
All you could do was say nothing as you

shook you're head no. I placed this pink
beautiful rose on the table and took your
hand, as we slowly danced to this

Song. I am thankful to have you as my friend
I could not have anyone, who could be
Any better, then you. As I placed my head

on you're shoulder, I heard you whisper something
Into my ear, I said 'What was that?" Then you said it
once again, and here is what you said "Please don't go"




Comment? All rights reserved, © Jennette Miller. Copying without permission for
non-personal use is forbidden




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Re: Pink Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:07:55 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.... thank you for sharing your thoughts with us..This brought back some lovely memories for me....
Jenni


Re: Pink Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by lady-quiet-dreamer on Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 08:48:51 PM AEST
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it touched me, so beautiful and so moving and i agree "please don't go"


Re: Pink Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by lady-quiet-dreamer on Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 08:49:02 PM AEST
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it touched me, so beautiful and so moving and i agree "please don't go"


Re: Pink Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th December 2007 @ 05:57:01 AM AEST
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awww, this was a really touching poem. thanks for sharing it.




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