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Array ( [sid] => 5781 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => He wants to be loved! [time] => 2002-10-28 15:40:00 [hometext] => My sons two & "people","family" tend to not give him much love,now it's just my opinion,they think I'm crazy ! They treat the other kids in the family differently than him!
Well I had to lash out to someone! [bodytext] => I'm so angry I want to scream,
how people can be cold hearted mean,
My son is two,and needs their love,
but they always ridicule and shove,
he's young and does'nt really understand,
why they never want to take his hand,
they treasure others put push him away,
thank God hes small,and doesnt know what they say,
I cry at nite,to try & understand,
why they can't love him like I know they can,
I know hes not perfect what kid is,
but he should'nt be treated like this,
So hes not yet potty trained,but he tries,
and sometimes makes other kids cry,
he learns from his brother,not to be walked on,
so if he acts on being hit,than he's in the wrong,
kids will be kids,and they will sometimes fight,
he's only two, this is'nt right,
I fight back as the mother that I am,
and tell them what I know I can,
they say "he's shy he wont come to me"
If they would just try,than they would see,
He's a loving child,but they seem to ignore,
For they want to love the other child more!
Thats fine,who needs them any way,
I love my son,no matter what they say,
He may not be perfect,but he just wants them to love him too,
instead they push him away,like an old shoe,
My heart is hurting for I see his pain,
If I speak up than I'm insane,
my mom never wanted to believe,
well now in heaven she can see,
"It's just your imagination" is what they say,
But I know what I see,and they are that way!
He's only shy to them,because them he never sees,
I must be crazy,because they never agree,
When he's older I will let him know,
what they did to him long ago!

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He wants to be loved!

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I'm so angry I want to scream,
how people can be cold hearted mean,
My son is two,and needs their love,
but they always ridicule and shove,
he's young and does'nt really understand,
why they never want to take his hand,
they treasure others put push him away,
thank God hes small,and doesnt know what they say,
I cry at nite,to try & understand,
why they can't love him like I know they can,
I know hes not perfect what kid is,
but he should'nt be treated like this,
So hes not yet potty trained,but he tries,
and sometimes makes other kids cry,
he learns from his brother,not to be walked on,
so if he acts on being hit,than he's in the wrong,
kids will be kids,and they will sometimes fight,
he's only two, this is'nt right,
I fight back as the mother that I am,
and tell them what I know I can,
they say "he's shy he wont come to me"
If they would just try,than they would see,
He's a loving child,but they seem to ignore,
For they want to love the other child more!
Thats fine,who needs them any way,
I love my son,no matter what they say,
He may not be perfect,but he just wants them to love him too,
instead they push him away,like an old shoe,
My heart is hurting for I see his pain,
If I speak up than I'm insane,
my mom never wanted to believe,
well now in heaven she can see,
"It's just your imagination" is what they say,
But I know what I see,and they are that way!
He's only shy to them,because them he never sees,
I must be crazy,because they never agree,
When he's older I will let him know,
what they did to him long ago!





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Re: He wants to be loved! (User Rating: 1 )
by spaceotter on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 05:10:54 PM AEST
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Great poem. I understand.


Re: He wants to be loved! (User Rating: 1 )
by aernby on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 06:15:45 PM AEST
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the expectations that others put on us is one thing -- when they spill over to our children it hurts double . . .

good write


Re: He wants to be loved! (User Rating: 1 )
by Justice3310 on Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 05:08:43 AM AEST
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i am so sorry for what you are going through that is awful... any child should be loved and adored they are kids....you are a very strong mother i commend you on that dont give up.....'That was a great poem sad but very truthful.. good lucl i hope thing get better..
Justice




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