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the stars will cry
Contributed by
InnerBeautyQueen
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 06:41:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the stars, at least, will cry
another verbal hero lost in their unspoken war
pretty yes, but not too brave
she left after all, while we all stayed
eyes open show them blind
eyes closed shows them worse; unkind
i can't play mommy to a world that's not mine
too many lives wasted upon the sublime
at least i have the stars to cry for me
acidic tears post my deep sleep
everyone else will wake up
rise or fall or whatever they like
i'll wait ever so patiently, thanks
when they're all gone i'll come up
wander with those left behind
a danger to powers untold so left to suffer
but not anymore
not with each other
Copyright ©
InnerBeautyQueen
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2004-07-27 18:41:03]
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Re: the stars will cry
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:16:23 PM AEST
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| very interesting and nebulous. =] |
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Re: the stars will cry
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 10:07:19 PM AEST
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| Nice work. Keeep writing, keep smiling...--the Moth |
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Re: the stars will cry
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 06:03:42 AM AEST
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very sad write, but beautifully written,
pixie xx |
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