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Array ( [sid] => 57793 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I need and more! [time] => 2004-07-27 17:50:04 [hometext] => To the one who makes the heart beat faster and faster [bodytext] => Have you ever been where you are stuck..........
You know where life is, then you dont
The life you want and need is so close, yet so far
Its the one which has much and offers all
Its the one who has the one who is so in love,
But yet so scared as you and much more

How come this has to be
It leaps and faiths ,and get so complicated

One who wants and needs ,but one is forgotten
All is in time and finally a want
The want is more than one can see, but want is greater
it consists of holding, wanting, and caressing

The one who gets what is discused here, Gets all
The all is more than any one could ever hope are want
This is falling in Love and not out.,............it means heart, soul

and all! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 14 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

I need and more!

Contributed by brew on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 05:50:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Have you ever been where you are stuck..........
You know where life is, then you dont
The life you want and need is so close, yet so far
Its the one which has much and offers all
Its the one who has the one who is so in love,
But yet so scared as you and much more

How come this has to be
It leaps and faiths ,and get so complicated

One who wants and needs ,but one is forgotten
All is in time and finally a want
The want is more than one can see, but want is greater
it consists of holding, wanting, and caressing

The one who gets what is discused here, Gets all
The all is more than any one could ever hope are want
This is falling in Love and not out.,............it means heart, soul

and all!

Copyright © brew ... [ 2004-07-27 17:50:04]
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Re: I need and more! (User Rating: 1 )
by bttrflynajar on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 06:10:05 PM AEST
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nicley thought out, i am sorry that you are not getting true love, it will come some day.

Re: I need and more! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 07:39:16 PM AEST
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Touching......I wish you all the best..
Jenni

Re: I need and more! (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 05:09:26 AM AEST
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There is a prayer I used to say, at setting sun at the end of the day. Please dear God just let me fall in love with one who to me is all, but let her feel the same way as I...

Each day and each night forever and a day.

Beautiful poem, Thank you for sharing.

Re: I need and more! (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:59:33 AM AEST
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true:) hugs n' love nessa

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