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Array ( [sid] => 5778 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => °°°Make me your angel°°° [time] => 2002-10-28 14:40:00 [hometext] => Are you one of those people who tries to help people so much that your trying to save the world, then realize you can't? [bodytext] => Make me your angel, come dance with me
Let's dance real slow, and spread our wings
I want to dance on clouds of true love
And watch the world from up above
×
Make me your angel, put me in your wings
Lift me up high, lean into me and sing
I want to fly around rainbows bright
And be your angel by day and night
×
Make me your angel, say you love me
Let's watch over the world, just you and me
We can guard all the children who have no home
And shelter them when on the streets they roam
×
Make me your angel, show me the way
Let's comfort the elder as they pray
We can help the mother's and fathers so tired
And the love you show them, i will admire
×
Make me your angel, show me the way
Let's help the abused, take their scars away
Let's spread angel dust upon their lives
Grandparents, kids, husbands and wives
×
Make me your angel, make my spirit fly
Today is the day to make things right
If angel i was not meant to be
Then save my life, and watch over me [comments] => 8 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 40 [informant] => OreO [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 27 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
°°°Make me your angel°°°

Contributed by OreO on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 02:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



Make me your angel, come dance with me
Let's dance real slow, and spread our wings
I want to dance on clouds of true love
And watch the world from up above
×
Make me your angel, put me in your wings
Lift me up high, lean into me and sing
I want to fly around rainbows bright
And be your angel by day and night
×
Make me your angel, say you love me
Let's watch over the world, just you and me
We can guard all the children who have no home
And shelter them when on the streets they roam
×
Make me your angel, show me the way
Let's comfort the elder as they pray
We can help the mother's and fathers so tired
And the love you show them, i will admire
×
Make me your angel, show me the way
Let's help the abused, take their scars away
Let's spread angel dust upon their lives
Grandparents, kids, husbands and wives
×
Make me your angel, make my spirit fly
Today is the day to make things right
If angel i was not meant to be
Then save my life, and watch over me




Copyright © OreO ... [ 2002-10-28 14:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: °°°Make me your angel°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 03:11:37 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem ... with a lovely message. Great write.


Re: °°°Make me your angel°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Sandy on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 07:00:08 PM AEST
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Lovely words. Yes I am one of those people who tend to get involved and Have come to realise that even if you touch just a fraction of all the troubles in the world you do make a difference.


Re: °°°Make me your angel°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by spaceotter on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 08:29:44 PM AEST
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Great and beautiful poem Oreo. It's an easy read and gets the message across well.


Re: °°°Make me your angel°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 11:29:08 PM AEST
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Again well done OREO! I really love to read about angels, I colect them! Just beautiful!
Christina


Re: °°°Make me your angel°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by fancyface4898 on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 03:34:44 AM AEST
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This is a lovely poem and very well writen you have found away to make the reader feel as though you are talking to and about them. It was troughly a joy to read


Re: °°°Make me your angel°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 04:04:33 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful thought...expressed perfectly. Well done! :o) Larry


Re: °°°Make me your angel°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 06:25:01 PM AEST
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i can really relate to this, i wish some one would take my scars away, but thats impossible....


Re: °°°Make me your angel°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by nomad on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 11:46:52 AM AEST
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A beautiful write, OreO. Very emotional, vivid, sweet. You are an angel.




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