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desperatly waiting
rocking back and forth
staring through these blood stained walls

despratly craving my own demise
despreatly craving for this button to be pushed
push this button push me over the edge
end this ***** cruelty
i don't want to fight to exist

desperatly needing your lies
despreatly waiting for the final scene
despratly waiting for you to say it,ll be over soon
desp[eratly trying to open my eyes
despratly trying to breath but i can't even try
i bvelive yu when u said it will all b o.k
you promised you would never leave me

despreatly trying to find an answer in these four blood stained walls
despreatly waiting for something that is more than nothing at all [comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 6 [informant] => grip-wth-broken-fingers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

begging to be pushed

Contributed by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:25:32 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

despreatly waiting for nothing at all
desperatly waiting
rocking back and forth
staring through these blood stained walls

despratly craving my own demise
despreatly craving for this button to be pushed
push this button push me over the edge
end this ***** cruelty
i don't want to fight to exist

desperatly needing your lies
despreatly waiting for the final scene
despratly waiting for you to say it,ll be over soon
desp[eratly trying to open my eyes
despratly trying to breath but i can't even try
i bvelive yu when u said it will all b o.k
you promised you would never leave me

despreatly trying to find an answer in these four blood stained walls
despreatly waiting for something that is more than nothing at all

Copyright © grip-wth-broken-fingers ... [ 2004-07-27 11:25:32]
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Re: begging to be pushed (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:34:15 AM AEST
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emotional and angry write, I could feel your rawness through your words :(

takecare
pixie xx

Re: begging to be pushed (User Rating: 1 )
by bttrflynajar on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 06:41:26 PM AEST
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this really captures a feeling, and i am starting to wonder if you are really ok? maybe you should seek help, before you hurt yourself anymore. (if these poems are an accurate account of your feelings) your a great writer, hang in there, one day you'll be able to breathe again.

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