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Pump up and hear it falling
The sky is crashing down
on the fallen one more time

Vibrate the tear around you
Open up there's a space around you
The ugliness pulls you farther
The sorrow of change surrounds you
and I feel how hopeless we've become

Too far to grasp you always
Feel the silence of the blindness
Your name is your destiny today
Your sky comes crashing down on you
and you're labeled the fallen forever

Vibrate the fear closest to you
Close out, there's no eyes upon you
Fall off it pulls you closer
as the sorrow wraps it's hand around you
and I feel how hopeless we've become

Dire memories for the one time feeling
of the faceless person that you've become
Feel the process that bleeds beneath you
situations of claim are thoroughly done

Smother the veins around the soreness
Make it feel better just one more time
Break the glass and pull the lever
Everything's never going to be fine
I feel how hopeless we've become

I feel how hopeless it always is to try
I feel how pointless it is to deny
So I accept what this life brings
and I accept how the time sings
it's tiresome song in my independent ears
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The Fallen

Contributed by InexactExactness on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Feel the anger rising
Pump up and hear it falling
The sky is crashing down
on the fallen one more time

Vibrate the tear around you
Open up there's a space around you
The ugliness pulls you farther
The sorrow of change surrounds you
and I feel how hopeless we've become

Too far to grasp you always
Feel the silence of the blindness
Your name is your destiny today
Your sky comes crashing down on you
and you're labeled the fallen forever

Vibrate the fear closest to you
Close out, there's no eyes upon you
Fall off it pulls you closer
as the sorrow wraps it's hand around you
and I feel how hopeless we've become

Dire memories for the one time feeling
of the faceless person that you've become
Feel the process that bleeds beneath you
situations of claim are thoroughly done

Smother the veins around the soreness
Make it feel better just one more time
Break the glass and pull the lever
Everything's never going to be fine
I feel how hopeless we've become

I feel how hopeless it always is to try
I feel how pointless it is to deny
So I accept what this life brings
and I accept how the time sings
it's tiresome song in my independent ears

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Re: The Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 01:28:28 PM AEST
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This is sad but has
Alot of reality and strength
Very beautifully written
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: The Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 10:00:12 AM AEST
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erg... i remember feeling like this quite a bit. thou i didn't have much of the creative gall such as yurself to sound so poetic. this is a wonderful write. kudos! ;0) -daniel

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