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just keep talking, your tired
but once again I''m forgotten
company. I won''t let you sleep
me away, not tonight, never

but furthermore I''am pushed away
you swear you don''t want it
this way. And I swear I won''t
wake up here tomorrow but
I also never stay fast to my word

I want to slowly fade away from you
and the memories I''ve bled behind
amnesia would be a godsend the
perfect get-a-way to our perfect end
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Our Perfect End

Contributed by AsILayDying on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:54:57 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I''m still listening so please
just keep talking, your tired
but once again I''m forgotten
company. I won''t let you sleep
me away, not tonight, never

but furthermore I''am pushed away
you swear you don''t want it
this way. And I swear I won''t
wake up here tomorrow but
I also never stay fast to my word

I want to slowly fade away from you
and the memories I''ve bled behind
amnesia would be a godsend the
perfect get-a-way to our perfect end

Copyright © AsILayDying ... [ 2004-07-27 00:54:57]
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Re: Our Perfect End (User Rating: 1 )
by SensitiveSoAbused on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:19:33 AM AEST
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great style :)

Re: Our Perfect End (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 03:08:13 AM AEST
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your feelings came across really well, well done.

wildejohnny.

Re: Our Perfect End (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 10:16:01 AM AEST
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Happily ever after....

I liked this, thanks for sharing.

Re: Our Perfect End (User Rating: 1 )
by paper-heart-hero on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:11:14 AM AEST
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This was done really well, great job. It reads well and the emotion is there.

Re: Our Perfect End (User Rating: 1 )
by AndTheFoolShallBurn on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 05:19:39 PM AEST
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*tear*

Re: Our Perfect End (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:44:25 AM AEST
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The last stanza is my favorite. Isn't that what we all want? When love must end, can't it do it painlessly or just a bit at a time...like the end of a movie when everyone knows everyone will be OK. Nice stuff.
Stitch

Re: Our Perfect End (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:45:38 AM AEST
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The one thing that pushed me away from this was how you ended a statement on the next line while starting a new one at the same time. Overall the poem was great though. Great write...
Jodi

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