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Array ( [sid] => 57689 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Without Trust, No Soul [time] => 2004-07-26 19:39:15 [hometext] => Adults sometimes don't realize how much they can hurt a child with their actions............... [bodytext] =>
I have never been able to trust.
That was taken from me when the first person in my life took that away from me.
When he told me to keep still that it was okay. That I really liked it.
See it’s not just mental and physical hurt that can do the must harm,
It is when you are spiritually betrayed.
Your soul is ripped out of you.
So that when your all grown up and ready to love someone your unable too.
You are unable to trust not only the person, but your also unable to trust yourself.

It’s like the bee looking to make honey and finding lemon in its path.
Then the bee tries again at another flower, but that flower betrays it
And then he goes to the next and still nothing.
Eventually the bee loses all hope to go on.
The soul becomes empty. The bee can longer keep going. There is no purpose.
This is what happens to someone who had trust taken away from him or her.
Their soul can no longer trust their own instincts or trust the love of someone else.

They are empty.

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Without Trust, No Soul

Contributed by Solnubis on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 07:39:15 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

I have never been able to trust.
That was taken from me when the first person in my life took that away from me.
When he told me to keep still that it was okay. That I really liked it.
See it’s not just mental and physical hurt that can do the must harm,
It is when you are spiritually betrayed.
Your soul is ripped out of you.
So that when your all grown up and ready to love someone your unable too.
You are unable to trust not only the person, but your also unable to trust yourself.

It’s like the bee looking to make honey and finding lemon in its path.
Then the bee tries again at another flower, but that flower betrays it
And then he goes to the next and still nothing.
Eventually the bee loses all hope to go on.
The soul becomes empty. The bee can longer keep going. There is no purpose.
This is what happens to someone who had trust taken away from him or her.
Their soul can no longer trust their own instincts or trust the love of someone else.

They are empty.

Copyright Â© Solnubis ... [ 2004-07-26 19:39:15]
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Re: Without Trust, No Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by shrunkin_fool34142316 on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 07:45:29 PM AEST
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the ponit was quite clear i'm sry to hear of such tragedy if u need a friend to talk to u can call on me.... good write

Re: Without Trust, No Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:18:20 PM AEST
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This is so true....I am terribly sorry. I can feel the hurt you have experienced while I am reading this.... I hope some day you can trust again.....
Jenni

Re: Without Trust, No Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 03:24:09 AM AEST
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Beautifully written, the hurt and the pain comes through.

I'm sorry you had to go through this.

But, no matter how deep the wound, love can reach deeper still. There is no pain that enough love will not heal, no sin that enough love will not redeem, no gap that enough love will not fill.

Re: Without Trust, No Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:32:18 PM AEST
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I Am Sorry About The Hurt I Feel In This Poem. If You Need A Friend I Am Here To Talk

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