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Betraying the one I keep so near.Thretening me with more fear.

Lips drenched with lies that go way beneath his eyes.

Trying to get them closer To the opening of my soul. What kind of beast are you with no self control.

Tempting me with the knowledge that you would even want me. But I know the next day I would really see.

Hands icey to the touch and rough on my skin. Knowing your trying to come within.

I hope you someday realize that the bond between sisters cannot be destroyed with jealousy.

So I ask of you now to stop and let me run free.

Beacuse you being with my sister means you should have never came on to me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Peanutzz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Your infidelity?

Contributed by Peanutzz on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 06:06:54 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

You thought I'd give you everything that to me I hold dear.
Betraying the one I keep so near.Thretening me with more fear.

Lips drenched with lies that go way beneath his eyes.

Trying to get them closer To the opening of my soul. What kind of beast are you with no self control.

Tempting me with the knowledge that you would even want me. But I know the next day I would really see.

Hands icey to the touch and rough on my skin. Knowing your trying to come within.

I hope you someday realize that the bond between sisters cannot be destroyed with jealousy.

So I ask of you now to stop and let me run free.

Beacuse you being with my sister means you should have never came on to me.

Copyright © Peanutzz ... [ 2004-07-26 18:06:54]
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Re: Your infidelity? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 06:15:31 PM AEST
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Good write. You go girl!

Re: Your infidelity? (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 07:22:25 PM AEST
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Excellent, Just wondering if you ever told your sister or if she ever found out? Hard situation. But you did right. What a creep.
Good writing.

Re: Your infidelity? (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 10:43:29 AM AEST
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Excellent work, and now to grab the mallet and swing it home!!!!!!

Very good write, thanks for sharing.

Re: Your infidelity? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 04:10:51 PM AEST
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Good write....Way to go!!! Hope sis isn't with him still...
Jenni

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