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Array ( [sid] => 57670 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => cookin pot( with me in it) [time] => 2004-07-26 17:21:44 [hometext] => i wrote this bout a girl i love a girl i love as a friend an wish it cud b more sumtimes an a girl tht h8s me [bodytext] => so many feels inside
most of them i want to hide.
i dont want to feel like this
but i do and its true.
I love her and care loads
everyone freaks out because it shows.
I dont know why but i do
and it makes me feel like a piece of poo.
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realy about three ppl this a girl a friend^, an the girl thts thy endv
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Then theres this *****
she might aswell b a witch.
Shes got me under a spell
it stinks an makes me feel unwell.
I hate her so
but care about her every mo'.
It ***** me up inside
and hurts me and my pride.
I like her but shes so mean
i wish i was clean.
Clean of her clean of my feelings
but everythings mixing me up with all these meanings.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Snapz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

cookin pot( with me in it)

Contributed by Snapz on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:21:44 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

so many feels inside
most of them i want to hide.
i dont want to feel like this
but i do and its true.
I love her and care loads
everyone freaks out because it shows.
I dont know why but i do
and it makes me feel like a piece of poo.
----------------------------------------
realy about three ppl this a girl a friend^, an the girl thts thy endv
----------------------------------------
Then theres this *****
she might aswell b a witch.
Shes got me under a spell
it stinks an makes me feel unwell.
I hate her so
but care about her every mo'.
It ***** me up inside
and hurts me and my pride.
I like her but shes so mean
i wish i was clean.
Clean of her clean of my feelings
but everythings mixing me up with all these meanings.

Copyright © Snapz ... [ 2004-07-26 17:21:44]
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Re: cookin pot( with me in it) (User Rating: 1 )
by badboyzlover on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:30:01 PM AEST
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Dont hide your feelings tell them both what you really feel towards them.

Re: cookin pot( with me in it) (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:02:13 AM AEST
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I have to agree with Jarred, well i tend to agree with Jarred alot. This poem is excellent and so raw. Just honey u know where i am if u ever want me any way at all in this world! love ya

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