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Array ( [sid] => 57668 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dont tell me you'll love me til the end of forever [time] => 2004-07-26 17:15:10 [hometext] => Well please read and comment Id love to see your point of view...thanks.... [bodytext] => You may tell me,
You can pull down the stars
Conquer the moon, kiss the sun for me

But don't tell me

That you'd love me 'til the end of forever
For it's just like lovely roses that forbid my touch.

You may tell me,
You can reap an apple from a mango tree
Or grow strawberries on hot summer days

But don't tell me,

You'd love me 'til the end of forever
For it's just like my sweet dreams, mine when I'm asleep.

You may tell me,
We could walk along the clouds
Fly higher than the birds to play

But don't tell me,

That you'd love me 'til the end of forever,
For it's just like the wind I so much longed to hold. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Dont tell me you'll love me til the end of forever

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:15:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You may tell me,
You can pull down the stars
Conquer the moon, kiss the sun for me

But don't tell me

That you'd love me 'til the end of forever
For it's just like lovely roses that forbid my touch.

You may tell me,
You can reap an apple from a mango tree
Or grow strawberries on hot summer days

But don't tell me,

You'd love me 'til the end of forever
For it's just like my sweet dreams, mine when I'm asleep.

You may tell me,
We could walk along the clouds
Fly higher than the birds to play

But don't tell me,

That you'd love me 'til the end of forever,
For it's just like the wind I so much longed to hold.

Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-07-26 17:15:10]
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Re: Dont tell me you'll love me til the end of forever (User Rating: 1 )
by badboyzlover on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:22:41 PM AEST
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I love this poem soo much. You must really like whoever it is your talking about because you dont want to lose them.It is soo good plz keep writing.

Re: Dont tell me you'll love me til the end of forever (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 08:21:21 PM AEST
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Very differ...............deep! In need of the one that has captured you, or the feelings.!

Re: Dont tell me you'll love me til the end of forever (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 08:30:05 PM AEST
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Very refreshing poem. Good rhyme scheme, and I love the way you expressed your dissapproval of that love. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

Kimberly

Re: Dont tell me you'll love me til the end of forever (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:03:02 AM AEST
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wonderful write....

pixie xx

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