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Array ( [sid] => 5762 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Impressions [time] => 2002-10-28 10:45:00 [hometext] => I wrote this during a difficult time in my life when I was trying to figure out who I was, and so I thought I'd post it to see what you all thought.... [bodytext] => Tell me what you think
Please tell me what you see
Share with me your thoughts
When you look at me

Looking at my face
What does it say to you
Are the expressions fake
Or are the features true

What Impression does my image give
How does it make you feel
Is the love it tries to share
Fake or somewhat real

Do you ever look so deep
To see inside my heart
Are the pieces whole
Or are they torn apart

What is it that you think
When you see my eyes
Are they full of truth
Or do they shimmer lies

Tell me what you think
When you look at me
I really want to know
What is it that you see [comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 25 [informant] => horseluver [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Impressions

Contributed by horseluver on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Tell me what you think
Please tell me what you see
Share with me your thoughts
When you look at me

Looking at my face
What does it say to you
Are the expressions fake
Or are the features true

What Impression does my image give
How does it make you feel
Is the love it tries to share
Fake or somewhat real

Do you ever look so deep
To see inside my heart
Are the pieces whole
Or are they torn apart

What is it that you think
When you see my eyes
Are they full of truth
Or do they shimmer lies

Tell me what you think
When you look at me
I really want to know
What is it that you see

Copyright Â© horseluver ... [ 2002-10-28 10:45:00]
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Re: Impressions (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 01:16:52 PM AEST
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Wonderful expression of words
put together here. I think most
everyone goes through this in life
at least once to try and figure out
who they are or where they belong
Great write, keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Impressions (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 01:18:05 PM AEST
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I think a lot of people can relate to this...tho sometimes we might not want to know the answers...thanks for sharing....

Lasca

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