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Array ( [sid] => 57587 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hold me [time] => 2004-07-26 03:01:02 [hometext] => pay no attention to the topic...... that is a really stupidly required field [bodytext] => Hold me

i,
pick the scabs
scrape the surface,
screaming for whats underneath
the time,
glowing like a tv light
i am what i am beneath me
what is this?
lonely bright
i see you!
you dont see me
flourescent moon,
sell me quickly
never full and
hanging empty

Hold me up
Hold me up
Hold me up
hold me......

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 48 [informant] => feathercut [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Hold me

Contributed by feathercut on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:01:02 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Hold me

i,
pick the scabs
scrape the surface,
screaming for whats underneath
the time,
glowing like a tv light
i am what i am beneath me
what is this?
lonely bright
i see you!
you dont see me
flourescent moon,
sell me quickly
never full and
hanging empty

Hold me up
Hold me up
Hold me up
hold me......

Copyright © feathercut ... [ 2004-07-26 03:01:02]
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Re: Hold me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:17:54 AM AEST
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The topic demarcation allows people browsing poems to find out a little more of the poem's meaning.

What does this one mean?

I get the impression that by your name, it is about cutting, or (of scabs) a return to self-harm in some way. I like the way you used the glow of a television's radioactivity / moon in association with the lonely effusiveness, to allude to a reclusive, part-blind self-reference.

That's what I read (this time round), at any rate. I would have made a completely different kind of stab in total darkness, had I no topic (or if it were miscategorized) to go by.

Keep writing.

Re: Hold me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:35:30 PM AEST
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you have a very unique style of writing, keep it up!

wildejohnny.

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