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Array ( [sid] => 57554 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hurt feelings [time] => 2004-07-25 16:50:14 [hometext] => uve probally red it on lil gennas poems but its actualy mine thx hun 4 putin it up an 4 putin up wit me l8ly love u [bodytext] => bad me bad girls **** up the world
i hate her so, love 2 c her glow.
but her glowin is at me her friends hatin me tormentin me
not letin me b free 4 mi feelings 4 thy.

she makes me feel like **** and i fall 2 bits.
but i pick up an carry on but never with quite the same song
she takes the words rips them up
chucks them at me an **** off
doesnt even give a tose.

she **** mi mind
made me blind
blind 2 the ppl tht love me an care
made me almost kill miself bcoz life aint fair.
wel hey it aint fair never is an wont be
u just ave 2 learn 2b free.
free urself from the world an priceless things like perls
but u never can shes always there singin words in curls.
curls of hate an pain
tht send u insaine.

but thts a bad girls life
**** ppl ova like a knife.
stab in twisted around
makes the guy frown.
hurts him an brings him down
makes him wish everything is dirt brown
coz this guy just lost his crown

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hurt feelings

Contributed by Snapz on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 04:50:14 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

bad me bad girls **** up the world
i hate her so, love 2 c her glow.
but her glowin is at me her friends hatin me tormentin me
not letin me b free 4 mi feelings 4 thy.

she makes me feel like **** and i fall 2 bits.
but i pick up an carry on but never with quite the same song
she takes the words rips them up
chucks them at me an **** off
doesnt even give a tose.

she **** mi mind
made me blind
blind 2 the ppl tht love me an care
made me almost kill miself bcoz life aint fair.
wel hey it aint fair never is an wont be
u just ave 2 learn 2b free.
free urself from the world an priceless things like perls
but u never can shes always there singin words in curls.
curls of hate an pain
tht send u insaine.

but thts a bad girls life
**** ppl ova like a knife.
stab in twisted around
makes the guy frown.
hurts him an brings him down
makes him wish everything is dirt brown
coz this guy just lost his crown

Copyright © Snapz ... [ 2004-07-25 16:50:14]
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Re: hurt feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:05:56 AM AEST
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Np honey with having this along with my poems was glad that you finally decided to share your stuff with the rest of these lovely people. As for putting up with you lately has been my pleasure as you have helped me just as much. love ya always and great poem btw

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