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Array ( [sid] => 57537 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Daylight [time] => 2004-07-25 14:57:56 [hometext] => I don't usually write like this. But this poem is not just like any other to me.... [bodytext] => The darkness slips
Into a sunrise,
A red-orange glow
When moonlight dies.
Above the trees
In the morning skies,
Now darkness whispers
Its daily good-byes.

Sunlight hits
The moist ground,
The air is suddenly
Filled with sound.
The birds wake us,
Their songs resound
And it seems
I’m almost spellbound.

Wouldn’t it be nice
If each and every day
Would start itself out
In this same way?
For lately it seems
Darkness will stay
And daylight hides
Until it goes away. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 477 [topic] => 48 [informant] => hooray_its_jen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Daylight

Contributed by hooray_its_jen on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 02:57:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The darkness slips
Into a sunrise,
A red-orange glow
When moonlight dies.
Above the trees
In the morning skies,
Now darkness whispers
Its daily good-byes.

Sunlight hits
The moist ground,
The air is suddenly
Filled with sound.
The birds wake us,
Their songs resound
And it seems
I’m almost spellbound.

Wouldn’t it be nice
If each and every day
Would start itself out
In this same way?
For lately it seems
Darkness will stay
And daylight hides
Until it goes away.

Copyright Â© hooray_its_jen ... [ 2004-07-25 14:57:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Daylight (User Rating: 1 )
by kandyklown999 on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 04:01:50 PM AEST
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wow this is a good one....TALENT!!!

Re: Daylight (User Rating: 1 )
by Gentledove on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 05:05:02 PM AEST
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A very nice write Jen.
gentledove

Re: Daylight (User Rating: 1 )
by pvd on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 08:15:46 PM AEST
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Nice ryhme scheme. This a thoughtful piece.
Keep writing.

Re: Daylight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 08:26:41 PM AEST
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I think this is one of your best pieces so far that I have read, Jenna. I know life has been rough for you lately, but the sun will shine brighter again. "Rememer the old say, it is always darkest before the dawn." Hugs to you.

Rita

Re: Daylight (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:31:57 AM AEST
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wow , i loved this one...... a great write,

pixie xx

Re: Daylight (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 12:12:48 PM AEST
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truely beautiful...... hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Daylight (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 10:07:13 AM AEST
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seems rather sad in a way. but this was indeed a very beautiful and touching write. im sorry to admit i havent read any or your work, but now im planing on reading it from now on, you've got talent. i look forward to reading more. 5 stars. i liked this one alot.
Arden

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