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But I don’t want to make the deal.
Life is so unjust.
Why can’t god just turn me to dust?
I have no heart to love with.
Playing the good ole’ game of ‘What if?’
There is no love for me.
That much you’re sure to see.
The one I love betrayed me.
And I’ll take my pain to the sea.
I hurt so much now.
But please don’t ask me how.
All I want is to die,
And meet you sky high.
Please lord here my plea,
Then maybe you will see,
I have no time left here,
Or down there.
End it all for me.
And I will surely thank thee.
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Prayer For Death

Contributed by PieceOfABrokenSoul on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 01:27:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



My life is so unreal.
But I don’t want to make the deal.
Life is so unjust.
Why can’t god just turn me to dust?
I have no heart to love with.
Playing the good ole’ game of ‘What if?’
There is no love for me.
That much you’re sure to see.
The one I love betrayed me.
And I’ll take my pain to the sea.
I hurt so much now.
But please don’t ask me how.
All I want is to die,
And meet you sky high.
Please lord here my plea,
Then maybe you will see,
I have no time left here,
Or down there.
End it all for me.
And I will surely thank thee.




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Re: Prayer For Death (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 01:53:42 PM AEST
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very dark and painful write, very well expressed,
pixie xx


Re: Prayer For Death (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 02:33:11 PM AEST
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Sorry for the LOVE broke and took from you. Alot of ppl do that and never see how much they have dont or will ever do. Very deep, and heart felt hurt. Please, keep writing, and one day maybe LOVE will come back to you. We all have someone out there.


Re: Prayer For Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Stoney1 on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 04:50:18 PM AEST
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It seems that every second poem on here is about love lost
and self destruction. It's time to try to say it in an original way
or just let it drop.

You might also want to saunter down a less trodden path;
dare to be different.

Why not try writing some happy poetry. Poetry by definition
doesn't always have to be downer themes.

Stoney


Re: Prayer For Death (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 08:05:24 AM AEST
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He surely knows, he walked the walk and experienced it all, and the kiss of betrayal, the pain of it all.

We all walk those paths, nothing here is free, and nothing seems fair, but its not what they do to us but how we weather it all. There are some bright and shinning sides.

Very good write, thanks for sharing.




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