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Array ( [sid] => 57504 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => blinded addiction [time] => 2004-07-25 09:11:53 [hometext] => Comments please good or bad [bodytext] => I cry in pain
blinded by tears
what am i doing?
for so many years
i dont understand
why the knife hits my wrist
its an addiction an obsession
i can hardly see
these cuts are so deep
i want this to end
soon i will sleep
and never awaken
for this is my life
and this is my pain
the blood hits the floor
ive fallen asleep
always i will stay
dead to this world
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blinded addiction

Contributed by trustisajoke on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 09:11:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I cry in pain
blinded by tears
what am i doing?
for so many years
i dont understand
why the knife hits my wrist
its an addiction an obsession
i can hardly see
these cuts are so deep
i want this to end
soon i will sleep
and never awaken
for this is my life
and this is my pain
the blood hits the floor
ive fallen asleep
always i will stay
dead to this world
forever more

Copyright © trustisajoke ... [ 2004-07-25 09:11:53]
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Re: blinded addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by kammie on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 10:31:27 AM AEST
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it was short but it was good
i know what it feels like to want it to end but not knowing why you want it to i that makes sense it was a good way to explain your emotions !
it was a great read
xxkisses* kammie xxx

Re: blinded addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by imlostbutloved69 on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 10:40:56 AM AEST
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I know hwo the urge to cut it. It's hard to stop, I know! But I did it! I'm a survivor.... you can do the same. I found s friend who was ALWAYS there and I promised him I would NEVER cut again. I broke the promise once, with 3 gashes. Of course I told him what I had done and we were both upset and about a month later he expressed to me he felt about the promise being broken. I apologized and repromised it. And I haven't cut myself in 3 months and I think I'm done with it..... forever.
GOOD LUCK!
~!~jEnNiFeR~!~

Re: blinded addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 08:57:04 AM AEST
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very sad, i could never write that type of poem but it shows you have a variety and i hope u do not feel that way

Re: blinded addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 02:33:18 PM AEST
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this speeks so true, your words tell all that I go through as well, I am sorry for you pain, I would never wish this on anyone, this was well writing and you choice of structure made it very strong. be well.

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