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Another day, another moment i spend with you. another minute another kiss i share with your lips, another hour another laugh i spill with you.

Birds are chirping, its early morning. slip my shoes on, step outside feel the breeze flow into my lungs. sun is blinding my eyes, california summer it never rains, always bright. drive to the beach, with you and a couple of friends, sit and talk, watch the waves crash with you in my arms.... and this is just another day, and another moment that i spend with you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 48 [informant] => frmpoison2static [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Shines So Bright

Contributed by frmpoison2static on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 03:39:46 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Shining moonlight sky shines so bright, talk about it, we will touch eachother. midnight its getting cold, i will hold you close to keep you warm. kiss your cheek as you kiss back. i can see your grin out the corner of my eye. its a feeling of love, knowing that me being with you makes you happy is a feeling left up to the stars. i know that chances like this, dont come very often, so i will hold on for as long as i can, dont want this night to end just stay with me all night...

Another day, another moment i spend with you. another minute another kiss i share with your lips, another hour another laugh i spill with you.

Birds are chirping, its early morning. slip my shoes on, step outside feel the breeze flow into my lungs. sun is blinding my eyes, california summer it never rains, always bright. drive to the beach, with you and a couple of friends, sit and talk, watch the waves crash with you in my arms.... and this is just another day, and another moment that i spend with you.

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Re: Shines So Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 06:16:08 PM AEST
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that's good, i really liked it. it was sweet and beautiful too. good job.

Re: Shines So Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by ChinaRivera on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 03:26:10 AM AEST
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That was beautiful. I felt all serene when i was reading it. i think coulda floated from where i was sitting to the dawn of a sunlit ocean reading that poem! ;-) peace & love -china

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