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What did I do?

I only ever wanted 2 be with you.

But you hit me and hurt me nearly everyday.

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Why

Contributed by Kazzy1231 on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 01:30:09 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Why didn't you want me?

What did I do?

I only ever wanted 2 be with you.

But you hit me and hurt me nearly everyday.

In the end I was glad 2 get away.

Copyright © Kazzy1231 ... [ 2004-07-24 13:30:09]
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Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 01:35:53 PM AEST
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Awwww this is so heart breaking, I am also adoptd but for different reasons, *hugs you*

pixie xx

great write,

Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 04:22:40 PM AEST
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It is sad that this has to be part of your memories of bio parents. I hope you are very happy with your adopted parents and that they make up for some of the hurt you had to endure. Your birth is not by choice. Adoption is and means you are special to them.

Rita

Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by TwistedCage on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 10:45:38 PM AEST
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I liked it very much! It was short, but descriptive. I was able to feel for a moment the ach you must have felt...

Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 07:45:06 PM AEST
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so sad...so many parents don't appreciate the the life that they helped create all they do is use them and take out all their anger and problems out on their children...its a horrible thing to go through and i'm glad that you got set free...great poem

please comment on my work too
summer

Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by pooja on Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 10:25:47 AM AEST
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Well written. Some questions never really have a good answer
Glad u have got another chance
Head straight into the shining sun.God bless and take care

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