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Array ( [sid] => 57409 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Need To Help You [time] => 2004-07-24 11:52:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Your Beautiful,
Do you know that?
I love you,
Do you know that?
I know who you are
But Its like im standing away, far
I read your poetry
I see your picture
I talk to you
I need to help you through

You dont understand how much your pain in me sears
I wish i could take away all your fears
I try so hard to fight back the tears

From your words i see the truth
Your trapped in a world so dark,
And no one can help
Well i have to,
Its something I have to do.

You may wonder why i stare at you,
When I stay
Im thinking and wishing of something i can do,
What can i say
I need to help you through

I look at you and i just want to cry
Cause i cantstand to see you in pain
I look at you and i can see through
I know whats true

You dont understand how much i care
Knowing you hurt i just cant bare
I dont believe theres nothing i can do to help
I wont believe it ever,
I wont give up on you, never

I will care about you forever
I want to help put your soul back together
I wont let you die [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 32 [informant] => willow_tara72002 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
I Need To Help You

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:52:25 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Your Beautiful,
Do you know that?
I love you,
Do you know that?
I know who you are
But Its like im standing away, far
I read your poetry
I see your picture
I talk to you
I need to help you through

You dont understand how much your pain in me sears
I wish i could take away all your fears
I try so hard to fight back the tears

From your words i see the truth
Your trapped in a world so dark,
And no one can help
Well i have to,
Its something I have to do.

You may wonder why i stare at you,
When I stay
Im thinking and wishing of something i can do,
What can i say
I need to help you through

I look at you and i just want to cry
Cause i cantstand to see you in pain
I look at you and i can see through
I know whats true

You dont understand how much i care
Knowing you hurt i just cant bare
I dont believe theres nothing i can do to help
I wont believe it ever,
I wont give up on you, never

I will care about you forever
I want to help put your soul back together
I wont let you die




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Re: I Need To Help You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:53:48 AM AEST
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this is a hauntingly beuaitful and sad write, very emtional, a deep write...

pixie xx


Re: I Need To Help You (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:57:58 AM AEST
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This would breath life back into a dieing soul, and not knowing what you may do, why nothing at all just continue being you. The lifter of burdens and maker of smiles.

Beautiful thoughts to a friend, Thanks for sharing.


Re: I Need To Help You (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:58:02 AM AEST
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This would breath life back into a dieing soul, and not knowing what you may do, why nothing at all just continue being you. The lifter of burdens and maker of smiles.

Beautiful thoughts to a friend, Thanks for sharing.




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