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her heart aches for acceptance in this cruel uncaring place
her eyes cold and staring into a world that once was
as her fake ugly smile spites her pretty face

skin so soft but yet so corse
from all the scars that this world as caused
a body so tired she cannot move
a heart so stained
but this life she did not choose

a life and body so perfect
but one day some one took this away
raped and filled her with hatred
broke her once loving heart in 2
once a smiling face full of sunshine
is now without a smile but with a frown
that remains without trying

swallowing hard keeping those ugly tears locked away
staring in to nothingness trying not to feel
this girl once pefect
is broken in 2
no one knows how to put back the peices
except the person that shattered them with there fists
the person who took away her perfect world and twisted its veiw
the person who did this that person is you.



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without a smile

Contributed by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 07:28:55 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



her blood runs as she tries so hard to to dry her tears
her heart aches for acceptance in this cruel uncaring place
her eyes cold and staring into a world that once was
as her fake ugly smile spites her pretty face

skin so soft but yet so corse
from all the scars that this world as caused
a body so tired she cannot move
a heart so stained
but this life she did not choose

a life and body so perfect
but one day some one took this away
raped and filled her with hatred
broke her once loving heart in 2
once a smiling face full of sunshine
is now without a smile but with a frown
that remains without trying

swallowing hard keeping those ugly tears locked away
staring in to nothingness trying not to feel
this girl once pefect
is broken in 2
no one knows how to put back the peices
except the person that shattered them with there fists
the person who took away her perfect world and twisted its veiw
the person who did this that person is you.







Copyright © grip-wth-broken-fingers ... [ 2004-07-24 07:28:55]
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Re: without a smile (User Rating: 1 )
by xlooseroftomorrowx on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 09:11:26 AM AEST
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this is an amazing poem.. yet very sad. i like it a lot..i hope to read more poems by you.


Re: without a smile (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 10:23:20 AM AEST
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very good write... keep em coming,

pixie xx




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