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Array ( [sid] => 57369 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Downpour [time] => 2004-07-24 01:34:12 [hometext] => I write when i feel like it, and i write about what i feel [bodytext] => Rain
Like tin angels falling down
Here in heavens tears
Is where we all shall drown

Rain
It's our life's saving grace
Here to come and here to go
It's here to make us ache

Rain
In this everlasting, earthly wasteland
Heavens war against the hell
A snowy fiery blizzard

Rain
Like life's true escape
This trembling teary sky
Of the blandness that it makes

Rain
Drops of sunny dew
Bringing heavenly life
Killing us meanwhile too

Rain
Quietly all of us sing
Of plaguing corruption
With senses not so keen

Rain
All the sinners in the town
Washing away their shame
Meanwhile, none make a sound

Rain
Drops of sun amung the night
Pulling emotions to and fro
Happy torture all in spite

Rain
Tiny prisms in the sun
Invoking every emotion
Any emotion, in everyone

Rain
As tomarow's babies crawl
They all grow up to walk
But only walk to fall

Rain
It will wash away our lies
It will fall from the heavens
It will take away our lives [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 43 [informant] => kyletycz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Downpour

Contributed by kyletycz on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 01:34:12 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Rain
Like tin angels falling down
Here in heavens tears
Is where we all shall drown

Rain
It's our life's saving grace
Here to come and here to go
It's here to make us ache

Rain
In this everlasting, earthly wasteland
Heavens war against the hell
A snowy fiery blizzard

Rain
Like life's true escape
This trembling teary sky
Of the blandness that it makes

Rain
Drops of sunny dew
Bringing heavenly life
Killing us meanwhile too

Rain
Quietly all of us sing
Of plaguing corruption
With senses not so keen

Rain
All the sinners in the town
Washing away their shame
Meanwhile, none make a sound

Rain
Drops of sun amung the night
Pulling emotions to and fro
Happy torture all in spite

Rain
Tiny prisms in the sun
Invoking every emotion
Any emotion, in everyone

Rain
As tomarow's babies crawl
They all grow up to walk
But only walk to fall

Rain
It will wash away our lies
It will fall from the heavens
It will take away our lives




Copyright © kyletycz ... [ 2004-07-24 01:34:12]
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Re: Downpour (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 02:50:52 PM AEST
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this poem is simply beautiful. very beautiful. it has been raining here for the last three months and it is so pretty yet so tragic. it is more than just rain also, it is emotion, its a feeling here. it affects everything. beautiful.
brynna


Re: Downpour (User Rating: 1 )
by rao0oar on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:50:22 AM AEST
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i love the rain i never miss my chance too go out and play in it......this is an awesome poem i love it




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