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Array ( [sid] => 57356 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I HATE YOU [time] => 2004-07-23 21:48:15 [hometext] => THIS IS A TRUE POEM I LIVE THIS [bodytext] => YOU LOVE ME THEN PUT ME BACK ON THE SHELF
ALL YOU CARE ABOUT IS YOURSELF
THOUGHT I'D STAY TO
THIS IS WHY I HATE YOU

YOU CALL ME TO LET ME KNOW YOUR NOT HOME
WATCHING YOUR EYES ROAM
ALL WE DO IS ARGUE
THIS IS WHY I HATE YOU

YOU TREAT ME LIKE A FRIEND NOT A GIRLFRIEND
THIS RELATIONSHIP IS GETTING CLOSE TO THE END
I HATE THE THINGS YOU MAKE ME DO
THIS IS WHY I HATE YOU

YOU MAKE ME CRY
YOU MAKE ME WANT TO DIE, AND TELL LIES
YOUR MAKING ME TO BE UNTRUE TO YOU TO.
AND THAT IS WHY I HATE YOU. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 6 [informant] => MoonbeamBaby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

I HATE YOU

Contributed by MoonbeamBaby on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 09:48:15 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

YOU LOVE ME THEN PUT ME BACK ON THE SHELF
ALL YOU CARE ABOUT IS YOURSELF
THOUGHT I'D STAY TO
THIS IS WHY I HATE YOU

YOU CALL ME TO LET ME KNOW YOUR NOT HOME
WATCHING YOUR EYES ROAM
ALL WE DO IS ARGUE
THIS IS WHY I HATE YOU

YOU TREAT ME LIKE A FRIEND NOT A GIRLFRIEND
THIS RELATIONSHIP IS GETTING CLOSE TO THE END
I HATE THE THINGS YOU MAKE ME DO
THIS IS WHY I HATE YOU

YOU MAKE ME CRY
YOU MAKE ME WANT TO DIE, AND TELL LIES
YOUR MAKING ME TO BE UNTRUE TO YOU TO.
AND THAT IS WHY I HATE YOU.

Copyright © MoonbeamBaby ... [ 2004-07-23 21:48:15]
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Re: I HATE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 09:53:14 PM AEST
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Caps mean you are yelling the poem at us. The meaning of the poem gets lost in them. It is a fair poem but you are causing the point of it to get lost. Try in regular type next poem. I think you will see the difference.

Rita

Re: I HATE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 04:36:30 AM AEST
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The anger you feel really leaps out from this.
Sorry for the problems you are having

steve

Re: I HATE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 08:15:29 AM AEST
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When the anger cools and we stop and look, its no ones fault but ours you see, the devil can't enter unless we let him in......see first who's at the door knocking...and take a long long look.

Good poem, thanks for sharing, and I like the capitals, no one can say its a happy thought.

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