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Array ( [sid] => 57331 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goths and freaks [time] => 2004-07-23 14:46:21 [hometext] => please don't take offence by the name of the poem xxx [bodytext] => Her name is Lola,
She loves to kill,
She’s never loved,
She’s never ill.
She’ll sit beside you,
Listen to you talk,
Then she’ll pounce,
Then she’ll walk.

Her name is Alex,
She loves to dance,
She’ll turn up,
Give her a chance.
Be fearful,
She might bite,
Walk carefully,
She’ll give you a fright.

Her name is Rose,
She’ll love you lots,
She’ll strike a pose,
Rose, she rocks.
Then at night,
She’ll shout and yell,
She’ll give you grief,
She’ll give you hell.

Her Name is Sash,
She is a Witch,
She’ll cast her spells,
The little *****.
If in the air,
There is a spark,
It is a sign,
It is a mark.

Her name is Jess,
She likes to rock,
But on your door,
She’ll never knock.
If you have,
What she wants,
She’ll get jealous,
Then she hunts.

Here they are together,
All evil inside,
You better run,
You better hide.
They may seem nice,
But do be warned,
They were good,
Till it dawned.

I told you this,
For your own good,
Walk carefully,
Keep up your hood.
Never forget,
To watch out,
They could be there,
They could be about.

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Goths and freaks

Contributed by LoserLottie on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:46:21 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Her name is Lola,
She loves to kill,
She’s never loved,
She’s never ill.
She’ll sit beside you,
Listen to you talk,
Then she’ll pounce,
Then she’ll walk.

Her name is Alex,
She loves to dance,
She’ll turn up,
Give her a chance.
Be fearful,
She might bite,
Walk carefully,
She’ll give you a fright.

Her name is Rose,
She’ll love you lots,
She’ll strike a pose,
Rose, she rocks.
Then at night,
She’ll shout and yell,
She’ll give you grief,
She’ll give you hell.

Her Name is Sash,
She is a Witch,
She’ll cast her spells,
The little *****.
If in the air,
There is a spark,
It is a sign,
It is a mark.

Her name is Jess,
She likes to rock,
But on your door,
She’ll never knock.
If you have,
What she wants,
She’ll get jealous,
Then she hunts.

Here they are together,
All evil inside,
You better run,
You better hide.
They may seem nice,
But do be warned,
They were good,
Till it dawned.

I told you this,
For your own good,
Walk carefully,
Keep up your hood.
Never forget,
To watch out,
They could be there,
They could be about.

Copyright Â© LoserLottie ... [ 2004-07-23 14:46:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Goths and freaks (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 03:01:26 PM AEST
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what is evil to one is good to another. and yes, appearances are deceiving.

Re: Goths and freaks (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 03:06:56 PM AEST
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I like this, it actually sounds like you could be talking about a group of friends.

Re: Goths and freaks (User Rating: 1 )
by LoserLottie on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 03:09:36 PM AEST
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Thanks rasberry, no it doesn;t actually relate to a group of friends. but im flattered you thought that. maybe i do have talent lol

Re: Goths and freaks (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 03:40:12 PM AEST
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I like this ...
It's different then others that i have read ..
But good..keep penning........

Re: Goths and freaks (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 10:40:39 PM AEST
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this is pretty good, diffrent, but good

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