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Array ( [sid] => 57291 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Behind her Eyes [time] => 2004-07-23 10:24:45 [hometext] => Please Comment [bodytext] => She sits alone
Feeling like the world has gone
With or without love
She's been alone all along

She has hurt herself again
Needs to apologize
Pain fixes the way they've hurt her
When they don't realize

Bleeding lines
Of crimson red
Makeup hides
The tears she's shed

She is swallowed
By the touch of pain
Drowning
In the bleeding rain

No one, she feels
Could undertand
The freedom of injury
By your own hand

She knows inside how bad it is
Needs to apologize
For the things she feels the need to do
...The pain behind her eyes

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 13 [informant] => _Raspberry_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Behind her Eyes

Contributed by _Raspberry_ on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 10:24:45 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

She sits alone
Feeling like the world has gone
With or without love
She's been alone all along

She has hurt herself again
Needs to apologize
Pain fixes the way they've hurt her
When they don't realize

Bleeding lines
Of crimson red
Makeup hides
The tears she's shed

She is swallowed
By the touch of pain
Drowning
In the bleeding rain

No one, she feels
Could undertand
The freedom of injury
By your own hand

She knows inside how bad it is
Needs to apologize
For the things she feels the need to do
...The pain behind her eyes

Copyright © _Raspberry_ ... [ 2004-07-23 10:24:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Behind her Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 10:30:07 AM AEST
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Awwww this is a very sad write Raspberry *hugs you* you have worded it very well, your flow is great, the poem is great.
you can see pain in peoples eyes as they are the mirror to our souls...
pixie xx

Re: Behind her Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 10:34:01 AM AEST
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very sad. pixie is right you can see pain in peoples eyes as they are the mirror to our souls...wonderfully written good job

Brandy

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