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[aid] => mick
[title] => The surface of the depths of my hell
[time] => 2004-07-23 06:43:02
[hometext] => also a lil self struggle in this poem. im sorry if people find the content of this poem upsetting.
[bodytext] => You don’t even notice your daughter’s cries of pain. Did you see the blood stain? See the cuts I bare on my arm. Did you even realize that your precious daughter likes to self-harm. Thinking I have my head together and such like, You all may consider this all very dreamlike. Try living in my head then it all becomes very real, Do you truly think I could be this cheerful? This is just a show for you all to be taken in by, Just a constant lie. Lets take you into the inner depths of my hell, Mind your step there is no sign to tell, I would turn a light on, but I’m sorry to say they all burnt out, Now is the time if you feel like you should pullout. So now get ready to face my demons, To feel them scream with hatred and pain, don’t listen to their summons. Don’t get to close or else you’ll end up like me, That is something you don’t need to feel or see. Hold on tight we’re about to hit a huge descent. My demons want you out they are hell bent. I can’t blame Them no one should get to close to me, Please stay away from the boundary. Stay away, you’re hurting me, go now never come back, Oh dear there is the first crack. I thought everything was patched up, You did it again. You messed up! Don’t worry I’m not talking to you, just one of my demons, Pain. Oh damn another bloodstain. Now we should leave, You have seen enough just go never come back, LEAVE! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 13 [informant] => little_genna [notes] => (Edited by Mod_11. Obscene word deleted) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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